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NightLokison — Haunted Library, Chap 01.6 Azir vs Green

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Published: 2016-03-14 06:28:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1097; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 6
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AND IT IS DONE, MAY THE GODS HAVE MERCY ON MY HAND FOR OH IT ACHES
And I have learned my lesson from doing long pages haha I hope you all enjoy Round 1~

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Comments: 10

meanya [2016-06-18 18:22:02 +0000 UTC]

My gosh I can't wait for round two!! What a feels ride!

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Strawberry-Eggs [2016-03-22 05:21:37 +0000 UTC]

It took me a while to get to this entry, but I'm glad I did! I really enjoyed reading this. I think your arts style is neat and the actions scenes are well done. I'm liking the story you are so far telling, with some intriguing potential hints at what may come. I'm especially enjoying how you're characterizing Green and his emotions. 

Overall, this is an excellent round. I wish you the best of luck!

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HyperionNova [2016-03-18 20:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Such a cool entry! First off I wanna say I really like the dynamic going on between the various emotions - that along with his (tragic? xD) backstory is making me crave seeing more of him in action Speaking of emotion - I also really love how you introduced Azir, even though it's full of feels seeing Green break down like that, poor kid must have had it real bad hah.

Aside from that the plot's really well structured IMO, leading up to a fight scene which is all sorts of badass Whole lotta action going on with the poses (last panel of part 3) as well as some cool effects =v=

Overall I really enjoyed reading this round, the excitement seems to be heating up from the looks of it - and the fact that your artstyle is as lovely to look at as ever - vibrant colors, clean and crisp lineart is really nice to look at. Nice work and good luck during the judging man

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NightLokison In reply to HyperionNova [2016-03-19 22:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh man I'm so not used to comments like this xD but thank you so much! I am so glad that the entry has been amusing people and that they're enjoying the story. I hope I'll be able to go on and tell more, but even if I lose I know I'll have lost to a really good entry from my opponent lol

But yeah Green has definitely had it rough, and his mental sanity is debatable xDD
but I'm glad the semi-insanity is being responded to well, and I'm glad to hear you like the style ^w^

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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2016-03-17 17:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like these characters and their interactions!

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NightLokison In reply to SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2016-03-17 19:33:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that you like them! Its always good to hear people liking your OCs ^w^

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callyanncreates [2016-03-15 14:30:04 +0000 UTC]

*high pitched noises*

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NightLokison In reply to callyanncreates [2016-03-17 06:51:38 +0000 UTC]

I hope that is a good high pitched noise xDD
I hope you enjoyed the round!

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Sword-Demon [2016-03-14 09:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, interesting. Hm...I wonder what Cognito has in store for Green. Still, this makes me wonder in the best of ways; eager for more, but juuuuuuuust sated enough to try to figure out what else you're planning. Nice job on this round!

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NightLokison In reply to Sword-Demon [2016-03-17 19:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, as for the plans I'm glad it tempts ya hehehehe

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