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Description I dunno....just tried to draw some of the characters from a manga story I had in mind....
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krysjez [2006-03-13 03:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Um...
Okay I know I'm not certified to give critique cos I can't draw too, but oh well.

First. From what I can see in the pictures, you don't like drawing hands. XD. Okay okay. You could work on the hands a bit more (I suck at hands too )
2. You can change the placing of the mouths if you want. Some of them are too slsanted an angle so they look a bit weird. Of course, its just me, so take no notice of my rambling.

3. The shape of Crimson and Sayusu's faces. They're bent a bit oddly at the side, especially for Crimson.

And lastly the image takes too bloody bleeping long to load...for me at least *swt*

Other than that, your sense of proportion and stuff is good.

Hey can I redraw one of them? (yes I am illogical)

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NightMargin In reply to krysjez [2006-03-14 03:36:02 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks for the advice! I'll try to improve on my next picture! *runs off with pencil and paper in hand*

OMG if you want to redraw them I'd be so happy!!!

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krysjez In reply to NightMargin [2006-03-14 05:00:42 +0000 UTC]

uh, okay

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Tsaalyo [2006-03-12 19:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Aww the princess is just plain adorable!! I'd happily live in her kingdom. ^_^

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NightMargin In reply to Tsaalyo [2006-03-12 19:31:43 +0000 UTC]

thank u so much!

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Princess-Amy [2006-03-12 18:35:36 +0000 UTC]

cute ^^

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NightMargin In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-03-12 18:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Princess-Amy In reply to NightMargin [2006-03-12 18:39:12 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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