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Published: 2011-02-01 23:57:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 59544; Favourites: 4248; Downloads: 772
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I wrote a poem today!Usually I hate writing poems because I obsess over rhymes too much and all my poems end up cheesy as heck, but this one I actually like. AND it rhymes! So I illustrated it and...here it is?
IN CELEBRATION OF MY 6TH YEAR ON DA I GUESS
[EDIT] holy granole how did this get over 2000 faves
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thanks everyone!
[EDIT AGAIN]
Ok, a lot of people seems to be confused about the "whores" part, so I thought I'd make it clearer. By no means is this an insult to sexually flamboyant people.
The line "politicians and whores" is commonly associated with social decay (originated from Watchmen, I believe) and it's also what a lot of nihilists say when they rant about how much the world sucks. Since I'm kinda mocking their attitude here, I quoted them. I thought people would catch the meaning on their own, as I highly dislike explaining something like this, but apparently some people didn't! Oops.
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I love it! The poem and how the illustration flows, it's gorgeous
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i love the rising star, this played out like a movie. awesome.
i know how you feel. i am 100 percent bound to be misunderstood
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This is kind of dramatic, but I love it, the flow of the poem, the rhythm and rhyme, each word could stand alone with the meaning that was given to it. Great job!
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I cant help but feel that this poem is a bit cheeky.
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omg this is so beautiful and touching! I cant even described how your art and the message has touched me
Its so god freakin beautiful!
seriously,this making me want to do also draw something liek this,if only my scanner can work well in a time like this
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One of the best poems I've ever read, not just because of the wording, but because I love poetry that really makes you think.
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I remember seeing this a long time ago!
It was back when I didn't have an account, maybe a month earlier I made one.
I never forgot this! And here I see it again!
This is such a wonder piece <3 I love everything about it and it really gets you thinking.
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By the way. You should read up on green-house gasses. We wouldn't be here without them.
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I am well aware! But you CAN have too much of a good thing, you know! Besides, for me to make the rhyme and rhythm, I can't exactly use "an amount of greenhouse gases that is several hundred ppms above the healthy dose that earth should receive" and give a comprehensive list of all of them
In other words, for the flow to not sound awkward, I'd have to sacrifice some
*beat*
prefection
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I see)) Just stuck out at me a little bit. How about using the word pollution instead of green-house gasses? Just a thought, whould keep to the beat and sound correct))))
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Thank you, here is the translation of this wondeful work 
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Oooooh boy am I glad to be the inspiration for something, especially something this pretty! 8DD <33
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Aww, thanks. :'D
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I lost the original file so I'm not 100% sure, but it might have been monotype corsiva
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Thanks, but I found this site [link] And I think it's Lucida Italic, anyway, thanks ^^
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I'll send it when I'll finish it ;D
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I forguet say that is for a desmotivational in Spanish if you can tell me I Remake it and I say that you've made it and put in the botom your deviant acount, can you give me permission?
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Man it's so tempting to write a story based on this ;v;
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If you want to, go ahead! 8DD
And show me what you come up with! <33
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This is the most amazing poem I've ever read. I love it <3
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I wouldn't exactly call it that, but thank you for the kind regards! <3
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This is beautiful, both the poem and the artwork c:
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That was stunning and very pretty. Loved the flow of the words. Awesome job here.
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Hey, no problem! Keep up the good work.
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I'm not what you would call a religious person, but this, I just love. The idea of perfection not being very perfect at all... It's brilliant!
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This isn't meant to be religious, it's more ambiguous than anything, really~
Thank you so much! <3
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I want to hire you to paint this on my wall! >_<
I get so emotional every time I read it though, so whenever I walk into my room I'd end up crying haha.
Incredibly beautiful
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Wow. I love this. It is so beautiful. I really like it. A LOT.
My whole philosophy about things like pain is that without it, we wouldn't know what happiness is. It would just be the norm. So this is really cool. I love it so much!
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i want this hanging on my wall, ohgod.
it's so epic. no more words. EPIC.
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