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NightMargin — WL-R2 Part3
Published: 2010-09-11 05:32:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2280; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 48
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PART 3Sorry I'll be doing the rest in mostly writing with illustrations, but even so I don't think I'll finish on time aaaaa
But now at least I have a hope of finishing yay.
THIS IS MY FIRST TIME WRITING ANYTHING FICTIONAL SO IT'S TERRIBLE AND BAD SORRY FOR MAKING YOUR EYES BLEED
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"I DONT LIKE THIS!" said Is
"But it was written very well! and he pictures were pretty!" said That-1guy
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ok, the way you had the words set up and colored was cool, so don't beat yourself up on not being able to draw.
also, you aren't a bad writer. if you worked on it I bet you could become really really good
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Thank you very much! ;u;
Nyeh, but it was pretty hard for me, haha...I'll try to improve after this though!
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Yeah.
I want to kick life in the face.
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Don't beat yourself up, these things happen.
but still- the buildup to the last panel
Holy crud that is scary.
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Wow! Nice, but I think you ought to work on your tense a little. But I love it, it's nice!
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Yeeeah, tenses are my worst enemy forever.
Thanks!
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for a first attempt it's really good! *u* am a bit sad to see less drawn portions, but your story telling is very descriptive <3
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Thank you! Yeah, I wish I could manage to draw the whole thing out, but this'll have to do ;n;.
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well, some thing is always better than nothing I say <3
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*eyes are bleeding*
Don't beat yourself up. You're under a lot of pressure and this is your first time writing. It takes a while to develop. But it's nice to see you try something new and the art can be found in the text. The color of the words with the shifts in the background really opens up something new here. I like it, personally. Don't give up! You can do it!
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Thank you! You're too kind ;u;
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Oh my God. Okay,well, your writing could use a bit of touch ups here,mostly your tenses change a bit, but the effects you did with the writing, text and background mixed with illustrations make up for it. This is awesome!
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Yeeaah. I'm horrible with tenses. This would be ten times worse if my friend wasn't there to help me with it
But thank you though! I'm glad you like it even though it's so bad aaa ;u;
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This- . . . .
my gosh- I'm sad to see alot of the pictures go- but the writing made upf or it 8'D
ALSO VOLTZ YOU BRUTE U8 < SHE IS A CHILD... voltz is about to be mind f*cked with I'm guessing soon : D
<3 I'm excited to see the next page.
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I know, I'm sad about it too. But it's the only thing that can save me from forfeiting....I'm sorryyyyy
He have a good reason to! Is is pretty violent in her own right, haha...
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IT'S COOOOOOOL I totally understand- our own entry had to lose color and get more of a sketchy look so we could meet the deadline- CAUSE FORFEITING IS NOT AN OPTION -MANLY-
She is |8 it's scary...... yet awesome to watch.
-WAITS FOR NEXT PAGE PATIENTLY-
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Oh snap.
SHIT JUST GOT REAL
Also your writing is fine
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I think the writing suits the style of story well! It actually adds a level of creepiness that would be hard to get in a comic!
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Thank you! <3
Yeah, last minute discovery!
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Ghost Iskai DOES NOT LIKE THIS.
It was still a read that kept me interested, because at least the writing is stylish.
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Thank you!
Sorry I couldn't do better
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He didn't know about her chair or her hat.
YOU FOOL.
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OAO
Woooow. You're really crossing genres with this one. I love how the words and images flow together - it's easily still as exciting as a comic entry.
Oh my GOD ISKAI I love this character so. T___T Damn, this entry was wild. What a twist!
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Thank you! You have no idea how happy that made me ;u;
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Nice job, Voltz... You just killed Iskai... violent Jerk...
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Not killed, just knocked out for now...
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Yeah, I forgot... "She dies IF she ever sleeps..." Still you're right Knocking out Iskai is Worse than making her go to sleep...
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OH SNAP
ISKAIS ALL UP IN YO FACE NOW
THATS WHAT YOU GET
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so awesome! forgot all about her other form till now
voltz, who you gonna call? ghostbusters
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