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Description “Better start listening, Roxas,” comes the voice in his ear, deceivingly smooth and seductive when matched with the jagged blade against his neck, “because I really don’t feel like cleaning my rug of your blood at this hour.”

The blond scavenger squirms briefly, stilling himself with a small sound when the metal presses threateningly into his throat. He finds it hard to hear the words of his enemy’s compromise with his blood pounding so hard through his veins.

“This is the second time you’ve snuck into our camp, you little wretch,” Axel reminds, “and you should be grateful I let you walk out of here alive the last time. We don’t do that a lot, got that memorized?” He tightens his grip on Roxas’ knee when he feels him begin to writhe again. “I’m not finished, yet.” With a deliberate twist of his body, the rise of his hips dig into the smaller male’s leg, eliciting a pained cry from the added pressure.

“But I am,” hisses Roxas, gripping the hilt of his sword in his sweaty palm as he struggles to get an opening for an attack, “kill me already, you disgusting pirate.”

There’s a chuckle, soft but menacing, and Roxas suddenly groans when Axel adds more weight on his back. “That’d be too easy,” Axel responds casually, “but I do have a proposition for you...”

“Forget it—“

Before he can even finish his refusal, the hand on his knee creeps upward, and Roxas stiffens, forgetting for a moment how to breathe. “W-what are you doing?” He feels his heart pump harder, quicker, but he fights it and tries to intake a long, steady breath while gritting his teeth.

“I’m giving you a proposition,” the thief replies. The palm of Axel’s hand caresses the back the of Roxas’ thigh, stopping just shy of the forks of his legs when he hears the withered “stop” from the blond beneath him. He smiles fiendishly, noticing that the scavenger had his eyes squeezed shut and takes the advantage, clawing his fingers cruelly into the flesh and drawing his thumb in hard circles, hard enough to leave monstrous bruises.

The undertones of pleasure frighten Roxas more than the pain and he can’t stop the gasp from slipping his throat. “Stop,” Roxas grinds out, face flushed with a terror, jaw clenching as he fights the urge to move, “I said stop!”

“So I have your attention?” Axel wonders aloud, taking several seconds to observe his prey before leaning in, lips brushing the contours of Roxas’s ear, “I want you to join us.”

“You’re mad,” the blond chokes out, “what makes you think I’d do such a thing? Why would I mingle with rats like you?”

“Because if you don’t, I’ll return back to your village and slay your entire family by morn, starting with your brother.” Crushing Roxas further, Axel tips the blade of his dagger just slightly, piercing the skin and drawing the first beads of scarlet as he continues with a sneer, “believe me, Roxas, I keep the promises I make. If you’re lucky, I’ll be the one to do the job, unless you want me to send out Reno…he likes to do the deed more slowly, relishing the bloody cries and pleas of his playthings before he tires of them completely. I’m sure you know that already, since you’re most likely to have been the first to discover the bodies of your neighbors…”

Roxas curls his fingers into the shaggy rug as the image of his neighbors, mutilated and mangled, flashes in his mind like lightning of the roughest tempest. “Put up more guards if you want, I’ll just show up with a merry band and murder everyone of Twilight Town until you relent. Get your own little minions at our doors, if you will. We have the advantage either way.”

Axel’s mouth makes a gentle brush against the hairs on the nape of Roxas’s neck, raising goosebumps. His tongue snakes out and laps up the blood welling at the wounds he’d inflicted. Roxas’s vision blurs, and his head spins with the adrenaline of danger and the first signs of arousal. “What do you want from me?” He says in a small voice, cursing bitterly for giving in to the man he had vowed to kill for ravaging his hometown.

A smirk creeps into the corners of the thief’s mouth, and he answers with a hot sigh to his words, “Kingdom Hearts.”


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Commissioned by !

I. had. SO MUCH FUN WITH THIS PROMPT YOU HAVE NO IDEA.

she wanted Roxas to have a checker tattoo on his face, and axel to have ripped jeans, while making tomfoolery on a fluffy rug.

then my imagination took over and it morphed into this.

THANK YOU SO MUCH, MUFFIN, FOR LETTING ME DO THIS!!!!


no line art available for coloring, kiddies :c sorry!

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Comments: 536

000Midnight000 [2017-03-15 19:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Hot!

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Scartato [2015-05-13 01:41:30 +0000 UTC]

best kingdom hearts AU fanfic ever~

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Nagas-Are-Forever [2014-09-05 01:17:53 +0000 UTC]

(////) This is just sexy

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LucyxKimi [2014-01-03 17:13:09 +0000 UTC]

The sord is so amazing moarplz.deviantart.com/

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WarriorLiz [2013-07-08 21:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Omg 0-0 that was amazing

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ulquiorracoyle [2013-07-02 16:39:21 +0000 UTC]

This is AWESOME!
Brilliant work!

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SomewhereCalledHere [2013-04-18 16:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Dare I say sensuel. Gotta love it. What's the text, a fan fic? If so, can you please throw a link to it. Would be fun to read the rest.

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Nijuuni In reply to SomewhereCalledHere [2013-04-18 16:24:09 +0000 UTC]

naw, it's a drabble I wrote ;D unfortunately it extends no where LOL so you're gonna have to imagine the rest of the story yourself.

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HellionSix [2013-03-30 02:31:28 +0000 UTC]

I was looking at this, and wondering if it would be okay if I did this picture as a lineless art. With your permission, of course, and since there is no line art available to color. I really do love this pic, by the way.

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BlackKingofNight [2013-01-24 00:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Can I write a fanfic of this? (if I've asked before I've forgotten)

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DooomWolf [2013-01-21 02:49:44 +0000 UTC]

NUUUHGH, I love this.
Curious question, do you post your writings anywhere? If so, I would love to read some of it~

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Neko-Toast [2012-12-28 00:44:05 +0000 UTC]

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MissSweet77 [2012-10-14 19:00:49 +0000 UTC]

10/10 would read.

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BlueDressWonder [2012-09-08 02:29:57 +0000 UTC]

im coking...on my love for this....

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V5Beta [2012-08-11 15:10:10 +0000 UTC]

This..is...to great for words..I love it! X3

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KashTheKat [2012-07-20 02:04:47 +0000 UTC]

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KashTheKat [2012-07-20 01:59:27 +0000 UTC]

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BlackKingofNight [2012-06-24 22:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh god... more?

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haithuong313 [2012-05-29 06:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Lovely... Can I translate this fanfic of your into Vietnamese and re-post it?

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haithuong313 [2012-05-29 06:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Can I translate this fanfic of you into my language and repost it here ([link] )?

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UchihaRiddle [2012-05-21 04:45:50 +0000 UTC]

.........where's the rest of the story.........I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!

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Kina-chan92 [2012-04-27 22:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Love! Oh my gosh! This is just awesome!

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DylxiaBlackAbyss [2012-04-15 18:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Just realised how similar this drawing is to a Naruto fan-art that I saw aaaages ago.

[link]

Had you seen it before? (: I need to point out that I absolutely adore this picture, by the way. The way you draw Axel and Roxas together makes my heart race, melt, constrict and explode simultaneously.

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Nijuuni In reply to DylxiaBlackAbyss [2012-04-16 08:31:56 +0000 UTC]

wow, no I haven't seen it before, but I guess predator-and-prey artwork runs along the same vein LOL XD thank you so much! i'm glad in the morbid way that i can induce your heart to...suffer so much LOL

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DarkxNeo [2012-03-19 22:07:03 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAY!!

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hiramiInuzuka [2012-01-08 05:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Awh, cannot color? No fun... Hahaha! It's a great concept though!

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DementedLama [2012-01-02 02:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Is there a fanfiction on this? O.O I must find it!

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Nijuuni In reply to DementedLama [2012-01-09 01:54:15 +0000 UTC]

unfortunately not XD the drabble is all that there is LOL

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DementedLama In reply to Nijuuni [2012-01-09 22:46:18 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I has failed...

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TioTheBeetle [2011-12-28 00:43:47 +0000 UTC]

i love this so much! you always manage to make couple pictures different from the normal exact same positions i see all the time. Yeh i admit i cant get too many creative ideas for these in my own works. you're lucky!

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Nijuuni In reply to TioTheBeetle [2011-12-28 09:42:38 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah, thinking up original poses is a freaking challenge, though i'm convinced i haven't even skimmed the surface OTL;; but thank you! i'm happy you like it !

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TioTheBeetle In reply to Nijuuni [2011-12-28 15:29:18 +0000 UTC]

like it?
i love it! XD

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takarayume [2011-12-02 09:56:46 +0000 UTC]

so....smexy. *q*

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Merlouck [2011-11-20 16:03:08 +0000 UTC]

OAO!!!!!

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IsabellaHunter [2011-11-04 00:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God, I saw this on the front page and have been looking for this and for you forever! You have no idea how happy I am to have found you! Your work is just so awesome... I mean, you have no idea how much I love it.

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Nijuuni In reply to IsabellaHunter [2011-11-04 06:49:31 +0000 UTC]

bawww i'm happy that you're happy to have found me 8'D 'cause you know..that's loads better than you wielding a pitchfork and then coming to find me.
Thank you, darling <3

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IsabellaHunter In reply to Nijuuni [2011-11-04 11:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh no problem! And personally I think pitchforks are a bit outdated. All we need is fully functional light sabers and I'm good.

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ukonee45 [2011-10-25 22:20:39 +0000 UTC]

That was so awesome.XD You are amazing!

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XxTechnoxAngelxX [2011-10-13 23:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Your story was amazing!

You're art makes me want to get as good as I can in the years to come, I suppose its a type of jealousy, but it's a good jealousy, and for that, I have to thank you for drawing so amazingly!

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kellyraesmithart [2011-10-13 09:34:27 +0000 UTC]

God, I hope someday I'll be this good at drawing. TT A TT

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secondaccident [2011-09-28 19:48:57 +0000 UTC]

I really love the little stories you write for the pictures. :3 And I also love your style.

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Nijuuni In reply to secondaccident [2011-10-05 04:08:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! i'm glad you like reading them as much as i love writing them 8'D <3

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SasuK343ver [2011-09-21 23:16:22 +0000 UTC]

All i gotta is.... O M G !!!!!!!!!! <3

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InsomniaSong [2011-09-05 01:39:02 +0000 UTC]

You need to make this into a full story. Seriously.

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randomperson77 In reply to InsomniaSong [2011-09-17 20:41:48 +0000 UTC]

YESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!

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ChaosTheHedghog [2011-08-25 20:24:56 +0000 UTC]

I see a story comin~ If I know right, someone will that this plot/idea and build onto it~
Could make a very good story!

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ThE-ReD-ThInG [2011-08-18 07:20:30 +0000 UTC]

OMYGAAD *0* wonderful!

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Luan-Wu-Lan [2011-08-11 20:19:42 +0000 UTC]

That just blew my mind....

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RETARDEDLITTLEDEMON [2011-08-06 22:48:26 +0000 UTC]

AWSOME

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Baby-Blue-Bell [2011-07-11 15:49:26 +0000 UTC]

"With a deliberate twist of his body, the rise of his hips dig into the smaller male’s leg" I couldn't help reading this line in a David Attenborough voice

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