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niketheconqueror — Pain of the Shark [NSFW]
Published: 2013-01-04 23:06:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description My childhood had one pain and sorrow
I hoped that he would be live to see tomorrow
But he didn't live to see me grow
For his death gave me great woe
I remember him teaching me to become one with the sea
Entering the water made me feel free
I painfully remember his bloody face
To me, it felt like he had fallen from grace
I remember him giving me what was now mine
It felt like he was giving me a sign
Outside, I am happy and full of bliss
Even thought in my mind, he is always missed
Inside of my heart, is full of hatred and revenge
For soon enough, he will be avenged
Here I now stand, in front of his killer
Seeing his face, gives me a deadly thriller
I can feel this heavyweight hanging around my neck
Knowing that he made my life a living wreck
As I grasp my necklace with a tooth of a shark
For I know where to hit the mark
My friends and beloved saw me as a beast
But I didn't care; my pain will finally be released
He offered to give me anything I want though it was strife
But the pain will haunt me for the rest of my live
I stabbed him in the heart with my dagger
His eyes was full of hate and stagger
I said to his face before he fell to the ground
Before his body made a sound
I told him without a hitch:
"I want my father back, you son of a bitch"
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Comments: 6

ZEB31 [2013-01-07 18:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. a great tragedy poem.

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niketheconqueror In reply to ZEB31 [2013-01-07 23:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.... any errors you see?

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ZEB31 In reply to niketheconqueror [2013-01-07 23:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Nope.

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niketheconqueror In reply to ZEB31 [2013-01-07 23:20:34 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! but yeah, you might have read the bottom..... did you?

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ZEB31 In reply to niketheconqueror [2013-01-07 23:25:54 +0000 UTC]

woops miss that part.

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niketheconqueror In reply to ZEB31 [2013-01-07 23:27:46 +0000 UTC]

*small laugh*

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