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Published: 2012-08-05 09:26:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 537; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description This is so wrong T_T
Deformed horse :S

This is not finished, but I don't know what to do with it at this moment.

Maybe I should add some more grass and plants, maybe more light on the horse?

Please, any critique is welcome because I don't know what I'm doing here :S
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Comments: 6

Riveriia [2012-08-06 02:39:12 +0000 UTC]

hah you used that landscape!! thats awesome.

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Paleona [2012-08-05 17:46:33 +0000 UTC]

This is looking very lovely~

Hmm, as far as critique goes... I'm not an expert by any means, but here are the things that stand out to me. The back end of the horse seems a bit low, I would imagine it would be level with the shoulders. Perhaps add some more dark values to the scenery to make the dark brown on the horse not stand out so much. Is the light source coming from behind them? Some highlights on their backs might look nice.
I really do like where this is going. :3

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Nimphradora In reply to Paleona [2012-08-05 17:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I see it now. I'll try to work on things you've suggested.
Thank you for taking the time to give me constructive critique Much appreciated ^^

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Paleona In reply to Nimphradora [2012-08-05 18:55:28 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I hope it was helpful. :3 Getting an outside opinion is great when you feel stuck.. hm, I should probably take my own advice, lol.

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sjomannen [2012-08-05 10:18:58 +0000 UTC]

lovely work

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ArnieliaGuard [2012-08-05 10:02:48 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful c:

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