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Nindotendofreak — Nintendofreak V2 Comparison
Published: 2010-01-29 20:04:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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I made him a bit bigger to show detail.I fixed the whole "width" issue for his body. I redid the t-shirt graphic because I felt the old was was a bit bland. I changed the hair a bit to better compliment his head position. I changed the color of his eyebrow and moustache to that of a color closer to his hair color as apposed to black. Fixed his posture, that was bothering me. Made the arms longer (further away from his body) so that it will be easier to remedy the elbow problem later (also, it looks better).
Once again I am looking for critiques/suggestions, thanks.
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Once more, critique:
The longer arms look good! And the moustache is now more clearly a moustache; before, I thought it was the mouth. The contours of the head are much clearer with the redone highlights. The logo on the shirt is more eye-catching, although you might want to experiment with moving it down a pixel (I don't know how it would look, just an idea to get it where it doesn't draw as much attention away from the head).
The sprite's left arm could use another pixel on the wrist, so the transition isn't so abrupt. The two pixels just hanging there on the bottom looks a little out of place. Try putting another pixel to the left of it. Or, if that doesn't look right, just get rid of the hanging pixel. You might want to lengthen the right elbow, too, to keep things in perspective.
The hips could use a pixel or two where the pants meet the shirt to make it look more continuous. The viewer's right side looks okay, but the left seems too abrupt of a corner.
Overall, though, great improvement. :3
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