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NinjaTanner — In the Morning.

Published: 2014-01-30 07:02:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 691; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description Inspired by The Everwhite Angel: Chapter 1The Everwhite Angel
Chapter 1
“It’s such a nice day out today. Don’t you think Apollo?”  I said to my beloved dog. He replied with a joyful yip as he ran around happily in the grass. He stopped for a second to catch his breath but soon resumed his playful matters. The wind rustled his fur only slightly.  As it did mine.
        The sky was clear and the sun was just beginning to set, colors of peach and plum poured gracefully over the sky. The day went by so quick, at least to me it did. Houses dotted the countryside, here and there. Most of them farms, and large ones at that. You could see the cattle being herded in for the night, and see a farm hand or two finishing up the day’s chores. Trees, much like the one on the hill by my house, sat scattered about, swings for children hanging from them, leaves swaying as the wind breezed through again.
       My attention was soon taken from the quiet landscape an written by

I don't have much to say, I read the chapter and just LOVED it!
It's so well written and is such a great beginning!

This is Kai of course, there's a lot of mess-ups in this but.. oh well.

Character by TheArtisticPony , Art by NinjaTanner .
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Comments: 70

mjponso [2014-06-19 23:22:24 +0000 UTC]

True beauty is revealed in cases like this, when a character is at their (apparent) worst.  Though I'll admit I'm not too familiar with Kai, she looks very appealing to me in this frumpy condition (for lack of a better term ).  She seems much more approachable, rather than just some Barbie doll who wouldn't have anything to do with "ordinary" people.

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NinjaTanner In reply to mjponso [2014-06-19 23:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Kai is always been a favorite of mine!

This part is an image I had from reading the first chapter if the story she plays in :3

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Mistgod [2014-02-01 18:40:38 +0000 UTC]

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NinjaTanner In reply to Mistgod [2014-02-02 05:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much :3

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RioluNation [2014-02-01 04:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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NinjaTanner In reply to RioluNation [2014-02-01 12:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RioluNation In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-03 06:04:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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BloodAngel28 [2014-02-01 03:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!!! Awesome job!!!

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NinjaTanner In reply to BloodAngel28 [2014-02-01 12:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! :3

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BloodAngel28 In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-02 02:24:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!!!! 

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J-BLAK [2014-01-31 22:09:07 +0000 UTC]

She's REALLY pretty in this!

VERY well done, Tanner!

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NinjaTanner In reply to J-BLAK [2014-02-01 12:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
Yeah I always make Kai really pretty x3

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MelianMarionette [2014-01-30 22:42:03 +0000 UTC]

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NinjaTanner In reply to MelianMarionette [2014-01-31 03:04:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

It appears she does, so that's good :3

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TheArtisticPony [2014-01-30 20:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh

My

God.

WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW FREAKING HAPPY I AM

THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH!!!!!!!! It's absolutely perfect! Ican't belive you did this! OOO I AM SO HAPPY!!!!

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 03:03:46 +0000 UTC]

You're VERY welcome!
She's so fun to draw!

I'm glad you like!
You liked the sketch I did of her recently so I tried going with that look.
Her face looks right but I'm not sure how I feel about the background.

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:07:46 +0000 UTC]

It is perfect!
 
I love it. Every last detail!

Tanner I love it so much it is now my computer background. AND MY AVATAR.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 03:13:20 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you! I'm glad you do :3

It looks nice an your icon but, your background huh? :3

I don't think anyone's ever done that  with my art..

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Well they have now. I hope that's alright.

I seriously freaking love it, I mean it  was a poster like the one I have I'd probably cry at it's perfection.

I"m serious. Or at least be REEEEAAAALLLY HAPPY!

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 03:23:54 +0000 UTC]

It's quite alright x3 Doesn't bother me one bit, I thank you :3

Hmm.... I can do that.
Make a poster out of it :3

I'll have to edit it a little bit but other than that

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Waitwaitwaitwait

Are you serious about making it?

Because if you are I might just die of extreme happy and my day would be possibly the best day I've had all year. And by all year I mean like possibly ever.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 03:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Well it depends.

Do you want me to get a poster of the digital drawing or draw out a poster like the one I made you?
I have some actual poster paper so it wouldn't be like.. extremely rip-able or anything x3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Uhm I don't even know I'm still amazed that you'd even be willing to do so.

I'm conflicted. I'd say like the one you did earlier but I know that's a lot of work. And you don't have to if you don't want to. I've never done a poster but I'm pretty sure it's a good bit  of work.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 03:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Of course I would!

Oh no worries!
I used to draw posters all the time x3
When I was 9 or 10 AG and our older sister shared a room, AG and I would often  get those big posters papers to draw on.

So it's no problem at all. It's fun drawing on a large space.. thing x3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:46:45 +0000 UTC]

EEE! I"m so happy! Thank you so SO much Tanner. You are incredibly awesome.I know exactly where I'd put it too. How big is the paper?

I'm torn. I LOVE LOVE LOVE your traditional, but I do love the digital.

Oh why is this so hard!!!!

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 03:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Umm.. I think it's the same size as the one I made you?
Yeah it's less square than the one I made but it's about the same.

x3 Perhaps I'll do BOTH
That would be fun :3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Less square? More rectanglish!

Hmm is the picture big enough to fit the paper? Seems like you'd have a bit of extra space.

Both?! Oh you don't have to do that! It'd be awesome but I don't want you to do more than you've already done!

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 04:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes x3

This digital one? My original size of this drawing is huge so it should fit fine x3

I would do both but I don't wanna like.. Make your mom have to buy MORE frames for them xD

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 04:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh well then! That's good! I was just wondering since it looked fairly small. My brain didn't think that it could be made bigger.

Good job brain.

Buffy says hi, by the way.

Yeah that's true. I was just thinking that. I can convince her to buy once frame but two would require me paying for it and I'm well, broke.

Time to do commissions at school again. It worked... somewhat last time. I do have a regular customer though.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 04:16:15 +0000 UTC]

x3 Yeah it's reallllyyy big.

Aww :3 I wanna hug him!

Does she mind if you use thumbtacts on the wall?

That's good!
I don't really get people in person asking me for art xD I don't ever talk to people about drawing.
Well accept from mom or AG x3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 04:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Bigger than the otehr?

He does too! He's resting his head on my shoulder it's adorable.

MIND? My mom would probably go insane if I made a  whole in the wall. She doesn't even like it when I use tape on it. The only way my mom would allow a hole in teh wal is if it's for a frame.

So that's out the window. I mean we painted the walls a while back and since then it's in the frame or not on the wall at all. (Though I have a calender crappily stuck to the wall with kneaded eraser. And a nail, but that was done prior to our living here.)

I have one oe two. the girl and my brother. MY mom sometime does for my Aunt sometimes though.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-01-31 10:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, he sounds like such a sweetie!

Well I guess she'd prefer to buy a frame x3
Still, I don't wanna like, force her to get a frame just cause i drew it.

My mom on the other hand is all for nailing stuff on the wall xD She always just gets a cup of paint and covers up any holes if there is any. Like I'm not kidding, she has over 100 photos in her room x3 (actually she took them down a couple days ago to repaint and rearrange)

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 20:54:48 +0000 UTC]

He is! I wuv my little Buffy.

Don't worry about it! I can help out with paying for it. Besides there's always the option to have a smaller frame. I think it's possible to cut the paper but I don't want you to do that if you don't have to or want to. That was just an idea.

LOL I think I'd like your mom. My mom is the opposite of that!

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-02-01 12:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Now I just having figure out something to draw..

Yeah my mom's pretty cool x3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-01 17:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Something to draw?

And I think I might be able to get a way with tape. Though frankly I wouldn't want to tape a one of a kind poster made especially for me. My mom would agree on that. The paper would have to be the kind that tape doesn't bother.

Seems like it! My mom is awesome in her own ways.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-02-02 05:34:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, for your poster.

Oh good!
Nah tape wont bother it I don't think.

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-02 06:30:13 +0000 UTC]

I thought you were drawing In The Morning one for it.

That's good. I might be using that but I most likely will get it framed eventually. That way it stays nicer longer.

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-02-02 06:32:30 +0000 UTC]

If that's what you want then I shall draw that :3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-02 06:34:59 +0000 UTC]

You can draw whatever you want really. I freaking love everything you do so heck, if you have an idea that's better feel free to go to town with it!

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NinjaTanner In reply to TheArtisticPony [2014-02-02 06:36:24 +0000 UTC]

i could probably think of something :3

But if not then I'll just go with this here :3

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TheArtisticPony In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-02 06:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good!

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Gneiss-chert [2014-01-30 19:32:51 +0000 UTC]

OMG! SOOO Kai is sooooooo CUTE! =3

Nice art work! 


OOO I didn't even know she had some writings up! X/ Bad me!

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NinjaTanner In reply to Gneiss-chert [2014-01-31 03:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

Oh it's ok, I knew there was a chapter up but I never decided to just sit and read.
I'm glad I did though it's amazing!

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Gneiss-chert In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 03:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!


She did do a great job on that very colorful and gripping!  Nice descriptions, good dialogue! She will be a great writer!

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NinjaTanner In reply to Gneiss-chert [2014-01-31 04:02:36 +0000 UTC]

I wonder how the edited one will be..
The one posted  is like gold so what will the new one be like?

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Gneiss-chert In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 04:08:36 +0000 UTC]

=3 More content I would assume!  A few sentences could use better wording and structure, but small things.

I also suggested she consider adding one more pov to the story for suspense, and drama.  Some writers will do this.  It can be tricky for 1st person but if done well adds nice depth to it.  I think she could pull it off beautifully!

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NinjaTanner In reply to Gneiss-chert [2014-01-31 10:50:23 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't critique anything even if she wanted me to.
I'm no writer, and to me it's perfect x3

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Gneiss-chert In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-01-31 12:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Well it does help her to know that the idea is liked! I think your picture inspired her to write again! She was lacking motivation for a while! =3


I only got 5 replies to why mine is liked XD  They all say the same thing so I think I'm good!


 I wish I had more writing experience! I am going by what I have read to learn how.  I'm sure the editor will make my papers bleed! XD

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NinjaTanner In reply to Gneiss-chert [2014-02-01 14:41:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad my art can motivate people in any way :3

That's good!
Someday I'll post some writing.. whether it be 5 years from now x3

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Gneiss-chert In reply to NinjaTanner [2014-02-01 15:31:31 +0000 UTC]

=3 

You do!


Well when that one day come I will be excited to see it!

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