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asinineCompadre [2017-04-08 18:11:47 +0000 UTC]

Heya, I found this on ProjectComment so here i am commenting :)

I'm gonna start by saying that the colors are absolutely amazing. I think you have a great sense for color palette and it show through most of your work, like in "Yellow" and "Vriska" . (can't stop the homestuck amirite?). And as much as i also love the simple coloring technique you used, simply using mostly flat colors, i think a piece like this would work way better in the coloring styles like "Yellow" or "Take me With You" where you took more time to render texture and lighting, and seeing how this is a piece where there isnt much of an obvious story to tell, making it more rendered makes it more interesting.

I do have a small problem with the posing and anatomy. the pose feels a bit awkward. judging from hair and the flow of the necklace, this person just stopped in the middle of a quick motion, either turning their head, lurching forward, or both. but the shoulder is way too uptight and tense for either option to feel natural. anatomy wise, the arm just seems a little thin and i feel the shoulder should be placed a tad higher.

I also love the background and the decision to fade the colors into the background, which is something you've done before, particularly "Spider Dance"

All in all, this is a very relaxing piece because of the cool palette and flow of the hair, but could use a little more work to make the pose less tense. I love your art, im definitely adding you into my watch list

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Arineange [2017-04-06 12:31:59 +0000 UTC]

lovely ! I like the soft lighting and the delicacy of the picture. Her pendant and blue eyes are emphasized by the light and it's very nice!! Actually everything is very soft yet the pose and lighting give some impact to the image. Great job!!

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Cody-Lee-Jones [2017-04-01 06:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Hello! First off, I think the color scheme you used is fantastic the mix of pastel and nearly neon in the blue and green's is what I really love most, the lines are all very solid and rich making her stand out more. The Leaf and her eyes is what really caught me, The color spill over oh most  makes it looks like a sparkle or a glow on the tip of the leaf which I also really enjoyed. I would say if anything as far as critiquing goes and this is only due to my over enjoyment of particle and small details is more fine detailing, or perhaps an enhanced version adding blemishes or freckles on her cheek, sparkles around her necklace, with small glows same with the eyes, just small details to really make it pop, all your sketches are very very well done, which makes it so hard to be nit picky. The piece you did "Red Like Rose" has much of the detailing I was speaking of before hand, mostly in the eyes like wise with spider dance the small touches of white makes the strands pop so I think effectively applying the same, and putting the minor details here would speak volumes.  over all great! Love it! Keep it up!

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Shuman100 [2017-03-30 15:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Honestly there isn't much to comment on, the lighting creates a nice area of interest everything fades from it nicely. The arms a little small though

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02Aya [2017-03-28 21:57:29 +0000 UTC]

I love the soft lighting and flow! QAQ So pretty!

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Kikomyu [2017-03-28 21:45:01 +0000 UTC]

AA THIS IS REALLY PRETTY! The colours are very calm and pretty, and the shading is really nice. The thing that kinda annoys me tho is the arm, it's a little bit too skinny, and the corset seems a little high but that's just my preference. 

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k-Liight [2017-03-28 20:33:07 +0000 UTC]

this is so awesome!

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PhantomMangle1 [2017-03-28 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

The lighting is well done

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