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Published: 2005-02-20 17:12:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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walking down fifthave.
heart racing
mind bracing
onto objects
in the past
and i hear the music
and words
and thoughts
from a nearby poet
his head pointing to the sky
joining in on his rhythm
adjoined souls
spirits
voices
and the sun
beats down
and my feet
d a n c e a c r o s s t h e s i d e w a l k
and i'm smacking gum
and singing
rhyming stanzas
and the bass is thumping from a nearby car
no voices
are hushed
today
and the sun is singing
beating down
reflecting
life
across the sidewalk
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Comments: 9
sweet... i appreciate the use of layout to add to the poem...in a way 'making' you read it and hear it a certain way...
good job.
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thanks so much
you are so sweet
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like the layout of this poem
it really cartches you eye when you first see it.
well written and clever
good job
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thanks so much
glad you like it!!!
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'tis interesting indeed. If only you could remember the guy's name. One problem though, the line "...rhyming stanzas". Seeing how this poem doesn't rhyme that line doesn't fit.
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yeah- but i'm singing them to myself- like a song stuck in my head
im not saying the poem...
it hasn't been written yet
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This is just an extraordinary poem! It makes me want to come alive, to jump, to dance, to celebrate!
I hope you will think about getting your poems together in a collection and then submiting them to publishers!!! You have knocked my socks off today!!!
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