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Published: 2005-02-24 02:27:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Amber sinks into my
grey stained room
at last
everything is still
but my coffee cup swirls
with artificial sweetener
and my freckled legs
need to be shaved
and I hold a thesaurus
to find ideas
and the silence intimidates
my thoughs
and ambient noises from outside
mix with my steady heartbeat
and I hold my book of poems
the leather too worn
to be of value
and I stare outside
at two dogs
black and blonde
roaming the street
and I search

for inspiration
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Comments: 6

R4PTOR-89 [2005-06-27 14:00:51 +0000 UTC]

im guessing u mean "thoughts" and not "thoughs", nice poem though

"and the silence intimidates
my thoughs"

i love that part anyway

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nirvanadancer In reply to R4PTOR-89 [2005-06-27 17:48:47 +0000 UTC]

oh noes

thanks....

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R4PTOR-89 In reply to nirvanadancer [2005-06-28 02:47:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe its no problem

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TheHusband [2005-02-28 00:34:04 +0000 UTC]

Very cool, I like all the detail.

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nirvanadancer In reply to TheHusband [2005-02-28 00:42:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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TheHusband In reply to nirvanadancer [2005-02-28 00:45:39 +0000 UTC]

No problem, and thanks for the kiss!

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