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nitecharmer In reply to rockmelon-cube [2008-08-11 00:26:47 +0000 UTC]

sajdlk;fajw IM SO SICK ROXANNE. T_T -ignores comment- who's agent scully

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rockmelon-cube In reply to nitecharmer [2008-08-11 04:44:58 +0000 UTC]

lollol from the X-Files
(You mean sick as in catch a cold sick, right? not sick in the mind or anything lol)

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nitecharmer In reply to rockmelon-cube [2008-08-12 04:43:43 +0000 UTC]

lol u have to ask? =.=

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rockmelon-cube In reply to nitecharmer [2008-08-12 04:46:24 +0000 UTC]

lol yea

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nitecharmer In reply to SilentSeraphim [2008-08-10 08:12:20 +0000 UTC]

LOL you took the time to cover up the eye and everything? x3 thanks haha~

I have no idea what I was going for lol she just came out european XD

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SilentSeraphim In reply to nitecharmer [2008-08-10 08:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha lol you'd be surprised how easy it is to cover up an eye. Lift finger, put to screen, tadaa!

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nitecharmer In reply to Winyumi [2008-08-10 08:12:38 +0000 UTC]

haha I'm aiming to get better than this >3~ thanks

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Winyumi In reply to nitecharmer [2008-08-10 08:27:12 +0000 UTC]

you can do it!!

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nitecharmer In reply to ArkillianDragon [2008-08-10 07:51:48 +0000 UTC]

lol of course I would @_@ anything to improve~

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ArkillianDragon In reply to nitecharmer [2008-08-10 08:31:10 +0000 UTC]

OK- here goes something...

Eye- You did an ok job on them- they're definitely alot smaller than normal anime eyes which is good, but the right eye (her left)- it's slightly larger than the other which is something that'll throw off the rest of her face since we identify with the eyes first. Everything after the eyes being level and the correct size is artistic liscence. They're also a little close together, making her look a little bug eyed (That one is difficult to see at this angle I'd have to show you what I mean T.T )

Nose- the length of a nose for a realism face is 1 eye width from the dip in the nose down to the tip. Yours is a little longer- could be fashionable if done on a man, but n women, shorter noses tend to be nicer. Her nose is also centrally positioned, which throws her face off cause she's on a slightly 3/4 angle.

Mouth- her mouth is pretty much correct for the angle the face is on XD I think when the nose is corrected, you see it needs to move to our left a little, but other than that it's fine ^^

Face shading- Now this is where the real magic begins. You've given her some high end cheek bones for the lighting she's in. [link] This picture shows a girl with similarly lit cheeks- notice how she's smiling in the picture? that'll throw the face off too since its right beside the area you're questioning.

That I think is the issue with the nose and mouth area. It's a combo of the whole area since the human mind relates to it so easily. It's very unrelenting with faults. I hope it helps ^^

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nitecharmer In reply to ArkillianDragon [2008-08-10 08:53:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much~~ this was very helpful for me ^^

whenever I look at the eyes now they're cross-eyed rofl

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ArkillianDragon In reply to nitecharmer [2008-08-10 11:51:59 +0000 UTC]

It's the right eye that's the biggest issue with that. If you get that right then you'll be able to fix it no problem. It's a very good first attempt though! Don't dispair

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