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Nivilis — Confrontation 2
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Published: 2019-09-05 17:44:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 14633; Favourites: 224; Downloads: 156
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Description
Ghost menacingly raised her energy daggers.G: "I don't care what you call yourself now, the Corporation will pay me well if I bring you and the Seventh."
D: "Well ... I can’t allow this ..."
Devastator left hand began to glow pink.
P.S I have problems with English so tell me if there are errors in the description. ^_^
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Comments: 15
I hope they'd at least taste each other first before going for all that beating or killing stuff. Just look at the goods! What a waste to either bruise or bloody them.
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Everything seems fine to me so far!
The art is fabulous - of course! - and your story is playing out just fine.
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Your English is fine.
That being said, can’t wait for the next scene. The dialogue in the description and the interactions is very intriguing.
also, loving those eyes.
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In general, I use Google translator, and it is periodically mistaken...
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Where are you from if I may ask?
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I'd recommend using DeepL instead of Google Translate in that case. It's much better in my experience www.deepl.com/translator
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It's got translation options! I like it! Thank you for the advice! ^_^
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Ohh. Well no mistakes still. If there is some, we’ll let ya know lol😉
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