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Published: 2005-03-28 13:25:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 763; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description I wish I never told you
I wish I never said
I wish I'd never expressed to you
The things inside my head

It seems now things are different
Than what they were before
A friendship growing further apart
A friendship... Nevermore?

I hope it never comes to that
I hope that you will see
Your friendship, more than anything else
Means so much more to me
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Comments: 3

xXElleXx [2007-05-13 00:08:47 +0000 UTC]

i like it, can relate to it.

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PostIndustrial02 [2005-03-28 14:14:39 +0000 UTC]

There isn't enough poetry on friendships. Most relationships are friendships, yet there isn't a lot of poetry about them.

Nice job you did with the rhyme scheme. There isn't even any slant rhyming, which is something I usually see in poetry with a rhyme scheme.

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no2kkk In reply to PostIndustrial02 [2005-03-28 20:27:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks, any comments on my work is much appreciated! most of my poetry I submitted under another username: jenni-mort [link]

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