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Published: 2016-02-12 00:43:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 2037; Favourites: 159; Downloads: 7
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"It was at this moment that they both realized......Noriel f*cked up"
and so they died
Hey look, finally a good animation
actually not really, there are some errors that I won't point out so your eyes don't melt or something XD
But I guess there are some things to be proud of, like that animation part of Kana jumping. It was supposed to be only that but I went overboard.
Is it me or do my animations eventually become super steady and without movement? the movements don't seem so real to me but I guess is because I'm still a noob.
I love this two dorks, they are so stupid.
Just like they creator :'D
I smiled the whole time I animated them falling.
Oh and I know there are some people out there who like analyzing animations (like me aaah) but is really hard when they are gifs like this so I made a slowed down version *wink wink*
sta.sh/034sc0t5oxa
like I always say, criticism is well accepted.
I hope you guys like this
and
ENJOY!
edit//slowed it down a bit so it doesn't burn you eyes ;3c
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Comments: 83
holy crap this is not bad at all great job !!!!!!! fav <3
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with a lot of free time and patience
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I didn't know you can animate on fire alpaca
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oh well you just have to go to "view" and click "Onion Skin Mode"
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it allows you to use the layers as animation frames, and you can see the process by clicking "view" again and pressing "Autoplay"
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try not to make it to similar tho :'0
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Then we have some serious things to talk about x''D
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You can't just jump on your friend and make them fall off a cliff
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Wow! Really cool animation here! This is an awesome practice and idea here too. Very well done!
Alrighty now this is a good practice for your standard flat view, now in the future I think you should try doing different perspectives of animation (it will really push your limits but look 10x cooler too) Move the camera more, ave it in a different angle, use it to emphasize which movements are the most important. here's a few examples of what I mean
ca-tsuka.tumblr.com/post/13887…
anitagaughan.tumblr.com/post/1…
stringbing.tumblr.com/post/115…
activeraid.tumblr.com/post/136…
anitagaughan.tumblr.com/post/1…
I also think you should all more squash/stretch into you aimation and the movement of the animations. The jumps seem a little too stiff here. When the first character jumps, show a little more struggle when he almost doesn't make it and pulls himself up. When the second one jumps and hits the first, there should be a struggle where the first character gets pushed forward before falling back. I also think there should be more anticipation and reaction in the characters expressions and body language. Keep your character moving all of themselves instead of just their faces like when they're waiting or watching something. Something should always be moving besides the mouth, it will keep your audience's attention and make it more inteesting to look at.
But I think this is a great start so far! I love seeing that your practicing having your characters interact with each other and their environment too
Hope this helps! - Jen
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Goodness gracious. Dear sweet baby Jesus.
I must start crying tears with joy!!!!!! by saying, I’ve been thinking about your animations and oh GOLLY FUDGE APPLES! you have no idea!
The animation is splendid, the mood is just perfect and thit looks MORE like a cartoon!!!!!!
I absolutely LOVE how well you worked with the idea you did! and the expressions on them!
Seriously, that look on their faces when they see each other left me breathless
I love how you captured the body hows it goes so perfectly, YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I’ve lost count of how many times I’ve watched this, seriously. I made sure everyone I know watched it too!
I really love the ending as well , its too darn funny! xD Goodness, that was epic beyond words!
You are an amazing artist and also a animator, seriously. You are extremely talented and everything you lay your hands on turns into something epic!
I can tell how much it takes you time to do this! But you did IT AGAIN!!
I am so sorry for the terribly late reply, I’ve been through some complications
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This is hilarious and adorable. There is room for improvement, but what you have here is great! <3
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ha yeah I guess XD is still not perfect
and thank you!! 0w0
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yw X'3 are chu going to finish it? owo
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I was thinking about finishing it
But I'm to lazy XD
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No. Thank YOU.
I keep watching this over and over, and it just keeps making me smile, every time.
I can tell that you had fun making it, and that's what makes it so great.
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STAHP. MAKIN. DEM. KILL MEEE!
(*Dies*) (again XP)
Hihi, they be such cute lil buddies~ <3
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SUGOI!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FRIEND SEMPAI!!!!
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HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING SENPAI?
YOU ARE TOO GREAT FOR MEEEE
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NO I'M NOT
YOU ARE TO GREAT FOR ME
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SENPAI
HOW COULD YOU SAY SUCH A THING
IT SAYS HERE ON THESE ANCIENT SCROLLS THAT YOU ARE THE MOST AMAZING IN THE WORLD
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BUT IT SAYS IN THIS SUPER ANCIENT SCROLLS THAT YOU ARE WAY BETTER AND AMAZING THAN THE PERSON METIONED IN YOUR ANCIENT SCROLLS!!
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NUUUUUUUUU
IT CANT BE
BUT SENPAI
PLEASE
I NEED YOU
I NEED YOU TO BE MY SENPAI
;o;
THE SUPER ANCIENT SCROLLS PROBABLY GOT THEIR INFO FROM WIKIPEDIA
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you legitimately made me laugh with this omg XD
they got their info from Wikipedia
so perfect
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