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TheDeviantIndigo [2009-09-03 21:39:53 +0000 UTC]

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Nothing that I can hold on to by nobodyfedme is a gorgeous photo. I saw this and I just had to critique it.

I love the costume, I think that its really striking, as well as its some of my favorite colors, black and red. There isn't too much of one color, its balanced very very well.

I really like the makeup as well as the hair. I think that both truly define and add to both the outfit and the photograph itself. I really like how there were flowers placed in the hair, as well as on the costume itself this way they stayed both similar yet somehow different in the same sense.

Now lets not forget about the model. Shes a very pretty model, and I believe that her structure (especially in the face) really compliment the makeup and costume itself.

The only things personally that I would change, is perhaps her expression and perhaps the pose itself. Sure the pose is suitable, yet to me it seems a little too relaxed, or a little too off key; and her expression seems like perhaps she is focusing either too hard, thinking about something and bringing it into the photo (which isn't always a bad thing) or perhaps unprepared for the photo.

I personally would have maybe made her do a slightly different pose and expression, perhaps idolizing the makeup and costume a little more. However, all in all, regardless of those two small things I pointed out that I personally would change, I still believe that this photo deserves a 5 stars round trip in my book.

Great job by both the photographer, model, and anyone else who worked on the things that we see captured here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up" />

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druideye [2009-09-24 07:14:29 +0000 UTC]

You've been featured in my current journal here: [link]

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carvingbackbone [2009-09-07 06:08:20 +0000 UTC]

your work's been featured here: [link] in my watcher's FeaturePicks!!

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TheDeviantIndigo [2009-09-03 21:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for taking awhile to submit a critique. I faved this a day or so ago, but I was to busy to be able to take the time that I wanted to, to be able to do a longer critique because I thought that this deserved it.

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