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Noioo — PLAYER 01 | Prologue| LOADING. . . | Page 1
Published: 2017-08-02 09:10:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1169; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Finally! I made AU - uh - Better It's just story about this Sans. About his future after that - after Frisk/Chara broke RESET button and somehow everything will dissappear -
Story, characters, design and art Noioo
Please Don't copy or Steal anything! Thanks!
<-- This was just a sketchy sans and then - I just made lil story for him.
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Comments: 14
This is incredible looking! Everything you do seems to one up yourself! This illustrates what section of the story you are trying to portray incredibly well and the choice of colours is very pleasant to to behold. They layout is intelligent and keeps the flow going and everything is very well spaced. I especially like the shot of his eye on the second to last panel, it effectively show the fear he experiences before he turns to dust/glitches to death (pardon if i misinterpreted this scene). Overall I would say keep up the good work and keep doing what you're doing! <3
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WOAH! THANKS FOR AWESOME
Critique!
Always gave me smile!
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(nice, but might I suggest you connect page 1 with the start if there is one?)
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Woahhhhhhhhh
(Lmao I like how it says Loading in the title as my page was LITERALLY loading x'D)
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Yea - I really like this story--
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Prologue have name LOADING . . . ( Don't ask me why- You'll know soon )
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