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Published: 2012-04-13 04:42:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 8794; Favourites: 365; Downloads: 101
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He rode their tandem bike, alone.Related content
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sorry my english is very bad, what is tandem?
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A tandem bike is the kind with more than one seat.
Also, I love your signature.
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Oh, I see now. I had them before when my childhood days.
Now I can understand this 
Oh, thanks a lot. Dreamers unite <3
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I'm glad to help.
<3
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so emotional for only so few words i love it : DDDD
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Perfect. It just goes to show, you don't need many words to make a big impact. It's a wonderful piece, so simple, and yet so complex at the same time, with the imagery and all the implications that brings up. Fantastic, simply fantastic.
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Kind of sad, for so many words :")
Congrats on the DD
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My god!!! So beautifull, such a deep thought... Just like me...
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Mag-fucking-nificent. So very sad.
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I love the placement of the comma. The small pause. It creates such an effect!
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Wow, such simplicity, but such depth. It brings about so many thoughts...good job!
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oh come on! i work my ass off for making pretty pictures, and you get a DD by just typing 6 words!! DX
still, congratz on the DD
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Some people find beauty and art in the simplest things. Enough people believed this was beautiful and poignant enough that it deserved to get more attention and be shared with more people. You shouldn't decide for yourself that your effort is worth more than someone else's. Create art for the sake of art and if you are lucky and you work hard enough maybe one day your effort will be rewarded. however whether you agree with it or not, do not resent others for their achievements.
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if you read all 3 sentences i wrote, you will still see i said congratz on the DD
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my thoughts also, no doubt this is deserving of a DD, but I've seen fantastic art that barely gets seen and has never gotten a DD.
devs aren't looking deep enough.
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oh gawd tell me about it D:
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do you suggest things? it's also on the community to point out stuff they like
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I'm honestly baffled as well.
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I really admire how you create such depth and painful beauty with only 6 words. DD well deserved.
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Nice. Says just enough. Congratulations on your D.D!
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This is amazing...you really captured such strong emotions in such little words. Great job
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Some words take the form of greatness and some leave you breathless, yet others leave you wondering if you will remember even the first word a minute later.
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;C This is... so sad and hauntingly beautiful.
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Aaaaah! Yay. Thanks!
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Hello there
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Thank you! You're one of my favorite writer-types on DeviantArt, so it's quite the compliment.
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Thank you and you're welcome
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I like the juxtaposition between 'their' and 'alone'. I think the contrast there really emphasises upon the title itself and the overall concept of this piece. It is a bit statement like, but there is enough of what is happening to make this into a story, I guess.
Itβs interesting how he keeps on riding because I feel as if that is showing how the dream lives on for him, even if it doesn't for the other person.
Poignant piece.
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Some very good words places in an excellecnt order
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