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Description I hesitated for a while, to add a caption of Zhao's thoughts in the first panel.
Decided to let the reader guess what it was instead.

Page original size 5,5" X 8".
Rough pencils. Grey shading, lettering and word ballons done in Photoshop
These pages done for fun, and also as a good exercise in storytelling and planning on such a long scale, which I had not really done before.
I am not planning on inking, cleaning more or coloring them. I simply do not have the time.

The Avatar universe belongs to Mike, Bryan, Nickelodeon-Viacom-MTV.
All the characters belong to them, but a few of the extras are my own creation.
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Comments: 41

RobinTheBard [2020-11-16 05:17:33 +0000 UTC]

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FluffyTerrorist [2015-07-30 01:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Good choice on leaving Zhao's thoughts out. I think it makes you focus more on his expression to try and puzzle what he's thinking.

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treena-ivy-carter [2011-08-01 14:23:45 +0000 UTC]

NICE ZHAO... don't hit her again or I will be forced to break out my feminist that has guns with her.

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RosieGurrl [2010-08-26 06:03:42 +0000 UTC]

That's right, Zhao, attack the guards. Just don't drag her by her hair back to your cave--er, ship.

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burkeonthesly [2009-11-12 13:20:05 +0000 UTC]

SHORYUKEN!

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Omnipotrent [2009-05-10 06:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Saw that coming

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pinksy456 [2008-08-27 04:39:17 +0000 UTC]

ZOMG EVERYTHING IS GOING CHAOTIC NOW!@_@

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bluchimera [2008-05-29 19:53:33 +0000 UTC]

zhaokan paaaaunch! ^0^
too much super smash bros for me...^^''

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General-Blue [2008-05-27 22:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Hey, why's the Boulder working for Lao? J/K!

Zhao DOES have a heart! Erm, I think... maybe...

Another amazing page!

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rufftoon In reply to General-Blue [2008-05-28 15:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it's not the boulder, though he does look like him. Maybe a fan?
Zhao- tiny heart, mostly used to pump blood and not much else.

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General-Blue In reply to rufftoon [2008-05-28 19:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol, yeah, that's true!

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Doozigitis [2008-05-27 01:16:10 +0000 UTC]

And then you make me sympathize with him. Why, oh why. XC

(I love the skinny little guy\'s design.)

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elindor [2008-05-20 17:37:10 +0000 UTC]

and Zhao's heart grew three sizes that day...

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rufftoon In reply to elindor [2008-05-20 22:25:32 +0000 UTC]

...which made it about pea size, instead of flea size

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elindor In reply to rufftoon [2008-05-21 05:39:43 +0000 UTC]

next will be jelly-bean size!! how exciting!

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swan-swan [2008-05-18 06:44:14 +0000 UTC]

PWNT.

Fascinating character work with these people....Zhao and Nauja (name, right?) both are gaining definite, impressive personalities...while remaining in-character.

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rufftoon In reply to swan-swan [2008-05-19 06:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Yup, the name is right.
What is weird is...Nauja just started as a very minor character, just someone to remind him of his ties to the Water Tribe. But people made some suggestions, and somehow she grew.

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explosive-toaster [2008-05-14 22:12:32 +0000 UTC]

*CHEERS*
"And in Whoville that day, Zhao's heart grew three sizes!"

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rufftoon In reply to explosive-toaster [2008-05-14 23:17:39 +0000 UTC]

"...and then, he decided to conquer Whoville."
(and increase of 3 seems to not be enough)

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explosive-toaster In reply to rufftoon [2008-05-15 23:59:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL
Yeah, it might take a few more than three. D:

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ShuiYue [2008-05-14 08:52:38 +0000 UTC]

nice

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aquabreeze87 [2008-05-13 20:16:12 +0000 UTC]

So he does have a heart? xD

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rufftoon In reply to aquabreeze87 [2008-05-14 00:28:58 +0000 UTC]

An itsy teeny one. Sometimes.

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citizen17 [2008-05-13 15:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Awe, what she said seems to have hit Zhao right in the heart.

And I love the WHAP! URF! part.

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rufftoon In reply to citizen17 [2008-05-13 17:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Finally, a few words are getting through his thick skull and making him think.

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circe-albatus-perite [2008-05-13 02:03:51 +0000 UTC]

I agree with the other comments. Zhao's expression says more than enough.

Idiot guard, how about Zhao gives HIM a broken bone or two?

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rufftoon In reply to circe-albatus-perite [2008-05-13 17:18:20 +0000 UTC]

He certainly plans to let out his frustration on these guards.

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sylvacoer [2008-05-13 00:21:38 +0000 UTC]

oooooh, zhao, i hope you know how big an ass you've made of yourself in just the past 10 seconds!

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rufftoon In reply to sylvacoer [2008-05-13 00:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Maybe...just a little.

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Leila-Dinthalion [2008-05-12 21:00:01 +0000 UTC]

That scrawny dude has a tall topknot... O_O

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rufftoon In reply to Leila-Dinthalion [2008-05-12 21:14:43 +0000 UTC]

He's just trying to make himself taller.

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Leila-Dinthalion In reply to rufftoon [2008-05-12 22:01:59 +0000 UTC]

lol, maybe I should get a topknot too... but my hair is too short.

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Kursunada [2008-05-12 20:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, he's sad that he hurt his only cake slave. XD

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rufftoon In reply to Kursunada [2008-05-12 20:56:01 +0000 UTC]

The BEST cake slave!

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Joan-Kagami [2008-05-12 16:13:35 +0000 UTC]

realization of the violence of self XD

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rufftoon In reply to Joan-Kagami [2008-05-12 18:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Yup!

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Pretty-Angel [2008-05-12 15:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Good choice with the first panel. His expression says more than enough!

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rufftoon In reply to Pretty-Angel [2008-05-12 15:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks- I'm glad it works, even without caption.
(gotta make the reader's mind work and give mine a break)

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Pretty-Angel In reply to rufftoon [2008-05-12 15:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! You're doing a great job with facial expressions. Sometimes that works better than paraphrasing everything.
(Actually I think some thoughts and feelings sound kinda odd when paraphrased. So letting the drawings speak for themselves is not the worst idea at all.)

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rufftoon In reply to Pretty-Angel [2008-05-12 15:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I'm slowly learning to do that. I just get the urge to put a lot of captions sometimes.

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D45-0-89 [2008-05-12 15:07:02 +0000 UTC]

urf i like the guardmans face a lot
first on rufftoons pic yeah

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