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Nostalgic-Text — We Couldn't Match
Published: 2006-05-02 08:38:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description We Couldn't Match By R.J. Shewmake

There were many nights,
Thinking only of you.
Remembering everything,
All that we’ve been through.
And there were times which were hard,
That we would share together.
But of all I remember,
I thought to be forever.

But now that you’re gone,
What am I to do?
Now that I’m lost,
Gone missing without you.
All of the feelings,
I felt when I was with you.
Reoccurring nightmares,
Losing what was true.

But now I feel insane,
Scared, alone, and sad.
Is it even possible,
To forget what I once had?
To ignore everything is hard,
But to cherish is to find.
The memories that we shared,
Locked forever in my mind.

But now I’ll move on,
To forget our past.
And as hard as it will be,
I will make it last.
The heart which was mine,
So easily it was snatched.
But being with you,
It’s hard to believe we ever matched.
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Comments: 5

ShellMinded [2006-05-02 22:06:42 +0000 UTC]

me gusta mucho

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Gonked [2006-05-02 08:59:42 +0000 UTC]

I love this one, too. x3

A bit of criticism- I may be biase when it comes to things like that, but in the second stanza, lines 12 and 14 were trying to rhyme off each other with the word "you." Maybe you could replace it with another word? Like "through"? Or "knew"? >3> Blah, I suck at poetry either way. So don't take this seriously, lovey. D:

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Nostalgic-Text In reply to Gonked [2006-05-02 09:05:02 +0000 UTC]

Actually, it only appears that way because it's two sepearate rhymes of the same silible.

The firsy "You" is following after "Do", while the second "You" is followed by "True".
It only looks like it's rhyming off each other since thei're placed after eachother. D:

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Gonked In reply to Nostalgic-Text [2006-05-02 09:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see. >3> Like I said, I'm not very good at these things, lovey. Dx<

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Nostalgic-Text In reply to Gonked [2006-05-02 09:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Sure you are! :B
You were even given a chance to copyright your work, so shush! Dx

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