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Notebook-Queen — WIP, I need advice

Published: 2012-09-25 02:00:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description edit: sooo I kinda messed up and don't know what to do with the middle canvas(green)
I used this reference pic to draw it and i meant to flip it around so that the guys hand(black hand) was on the left side but idk what happened in that process
so i don't know how I should place it. the left image looks kinda creepy to me, but the right image the hands are on the wrong sides..... so some help would be really nice
and hopefully this all makes sense, if not just let meh know please


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I have to finish the middle canvas
add sum words and red "string" to all of them
then im finished
i just dont know if i want it to say
Kiss Me Goodnight Forever
or
koe wo kikasete (声をきかせて)
which means let me hear your voice
its also a song by big bang
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Comments: 8

Mortiscia [2012-10-07 07:17:30 +0000 UTC]

I think the right version is the better even if they are not black/black and white/white. On the right you see a bit more dynamic, especially if they're meant to be put next to each other. Or you do what =zo-ei suggested. Either way the bigger hand needs to be underneath the small one. Good luck!

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Notebook-Queen In reply to Mortiscia [2012-10-07 15:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your help
My laziness is telling me to do put it on like the right version
but my head/heart is telling me to do it like =zo-ei suggested
but i'll figure it out soon

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zo-ei [2012-10-05 19:59:25 +0000 UTC]

Maybe you could flip the hands over and redo the hand's outlines? :c

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Notebook-Queen In reply to zo-ei [2012-10-05 20:22:49 +0000 UTC]

oh and thanks for the help

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Notebook-Queen In reply to zo-ei [2012-10-05 20:22:01 +0000 UTC]

yea my sister said the same thing, i was trying to avoid that but thats prolly what i'll end up doing

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zo-ei In reply to Notebook-Queen [2012-10-05 20:34:54 +0000 UTC]

seems like the only thing to do
and you're welcome c:

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At-MsUpload [2012-10-05 16:58:45 +0000 UTC]

do it like

"its not a failure, its a feature"

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Notebook-Queen In reply to At-MsUpload [2012-10-05 20:24:50 +0000 UTC]

lol good idea

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