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Murder

Murder
She wrote

Murder
She wrote
On her skin

Murder
She wrote
On her skin
With the blood of the knife

Murder
She wrote
On her skin
With the blood of the knife
From the back

Murder
She wrote
On her skin
With the blood of the knife
From the back
Of the man that she loved

Murder
She wrote
On her skin
With the blood of the knife
From the back
Of the man that she loved
And lost.

Murder
She wrote
On her skin
With the blood of the knife
From the back
Of the man she loved
and lost.
A symbol

Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed

One last time.


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed

One last time.

But not before


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed

One last time.

But not before

With the blood of the knife


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed

One last time.

But not before

With the blood of the knife

On her skin


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed

One last time.

But not before

With the blood of the knife

On her skin

She wrote


Murder

She wrote

On her skin

With the blood of the knife

From the back

Of the man that she loved

And lost.

A symbol

Of betrayal and of spite

A symbol

Of love lost and love found

And of love torn away.

The ringing of wedding bells

And the cans dragging on asphalt as the car speeds away.

The smell of cheap perfume

And of soiled sheets.

The screaming and crying and identifying

Who is to blame.

The tearing of flesh

And the stabbing of men as they sleep.

A wife’s refuge in marriage

Broken by a whore.

Poison.

Poison she drank as wine.

She lay with her husband to bed

One last time.

But not before

With the blood of the knife

On her skin

She wrote

Murder.




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Comments: 9

JWA2277 [2017-03-11 17:13:47 +0000 UTC]

wow... a dark side you say?
I like the visual... almost knife like... over and over again, getting longer and longer.
what a cutting wit, to the point, and very bloody.

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SamChanandJasonKun [2015-09-10 06:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, amazing poem. 

I very intrigued at this particular style you used. It really helped make the poem flow; almost as if it were a song of some sort. This story you've weaved together is marvelous and overall the way you shaped the poem really creatures a small portrait of the characters we only know through the melody of an invisible piece of music hovering close to our ears as we read. 

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Notebook0601 In reply to SamChanandJasonKun [2015-09-11 01:40:22 +0000 UTC]

:$ thank you so much!

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JC-Solis01 [2015-09-05 02:05:22 +0000 UTC]

A great style, I must say.
It caught my interest as soon as I saw it. And I'm glad I read.

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Notebook0601 In reply to JC-Solis01 [2015-09-08 06:01:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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JC-Solis01 In reply to Notebook0601 [2015-09-08 14:11:59 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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Photographergirl14 [2015-06-16 03:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Great writing! It has a sad feeling in the middle of this amazing writing. Keep up the great work

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Notebook0601 In reply to Photographergirl14 [2015-06-16 03:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Photographergirl14 In reply to Notebook0601 [2015-06-18 13:37:06 +0000 UTC]

It's a pleasure!

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