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aaaaand, end of the audition C: Welcome to the luxury resort!! just look how happy the guys of pannel 4 look, like they are about to attend to a hippie party
hope you enjoyed my story and characters. it was ALOT of fun and experimentation :'D.

cameos (in order of apprearance) :
Aphari belongs to (and so does the bandaged tree)
Avonna belongs to
Lava Dog & Sparkplug belong to
Monty and Cricket belong to
Balloon belongs to
Gar belongs to
The Thief belongs to

what will I do in the meantime? first, give a quick revision to my whole audition to fix minor mistakes (page 3=fixed!), poorly worded dialogues (won't change any meanings, just potentially confusing sentences). I will also be reading the entries I didn't read yet and commenting a TON, so get ready to be spammed :'D. I have more than one hundred group deviations, and several unanswered comments, but be sure I'll go through everything.
I really have to apologize to everyone for being so slow in this regard. had a Dendrology final last week and also wanted to finish my Audition way before the deadline (I'm a massive paranoid regarding time my life is awfully unpredictable). besides, tomorrow I start the second semester in college C: (I live in the other hemisphere, it's Winter here)

and of course, thank you very much to you all for the support . It means to me far more than I could express with words. you guys are amazing!

BTW, know Yucca ignoring what Capulí says most of the time is intentional C; . she only responds when she cares about what he said, lol. and in the last pannel, she alludes to what she said in Page 7, pannel 2: [link]
now, I'm gonna go give my eyes some rest. the two big pannels took forever to do! (and sorry about the fourth looking so messy, I may smooth it a bit).

as always, feel free to point out typos, bad grammar and poor word usage . the dialogues here were especially difficult to write. sp first pannel. i have massive doubts with Yucca's sentence (she means that since they fulfilled their promise, both Aphari and Capulí are free to walk ahead from her. is it well expressed? )

Description
previous: [link]
next- end page. start reading Round 1: [link]
first: [link]
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aaaaand, end of the audition C: Welcome to the luxury resort!! just look how happy the guys of pannel 4 look, like they are about to attend to a hippie party
hope you enjoyed my story and characters. it was ALOT of fun and experimentation :'D.

cameos (in order of apprearance) :
Aphari belongs to (and so does the bandaged tree)
Avonna belongs to
Lava Dog & Sparkplug belong to
Monty and Cricket belong to
Balloon belongs to
Gar belongs to
The Thief belongs to

what will I do in the meantime? first, give a quick revision to my whole audition to fix minor mistakes (page 3=fixed!), poorly worded dialogues (won't change any meanings, just potentially confusing sentences). I will also be reading the entries I didn't read yet and commenting a TON, so get ready to be spammed :'D. I have more than one hundred group deviations, and several unanswered comments, but be sure I'll go through everything.
I really have to apologize to everyone for being so slow in this regard. had a Dendrology final last week and also wanted to finish my Audition way before the deadline (I'm a massive paranoid regarding time my life is awfully unpredictable). besides, tomorrow I start the second semester in college C: (I live in the other hemisphere, it's Winter here)

and of course, thank you very much to you all for the support . It means to me far more than I could express with words. you guys are amazing!

BTW, know Yucca ignoring what Capulí says most of the time is intentional C; . she only responds when she cares about what he said, lol. and in the last pannel, she alludes to what she said in Page 7, pannel 2: [link]
now, I'm gonna go give my eyes some rest. the two big pannels took forever to do! (and sorry about the fourth looking so messy, I may smooth it a bit).

as always, feel free to point out typos, bad grammar and poor word usage . the dialogues here were especially difficult to write. sp first pannel. i have massive doubts with Yucca's sentence (she means that since they fulfilled their promise, both Aphari and Capulí are free to walk ahead from her. is it well expressed? )