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I swear, I honestly did not want this comic to turn out the way it did. I don’t know what happened. I’ve characterized Wario as a guy constantly questioning and criticising the limitations of these comics (and so therefore criticising my own writing too) and I only noticed halfway through the comic that I was writing myself into a corner. I suddenly understand now what professional writers are referring to when they claim their characters “write themselves”. I think Wario was basically writing himself here, and I have to say I didn’t like it. He totally ruined what I wanted to do. -_-
I’ve turned this into a two-parter so that I can do what I meant to do next week. But seriously, sorry about all this. If I were smart, I’d take this as a lesson as to why I should not make up the dialogue of comics as I go along, but I’m not smart.
...Wario honestly doesn’t give a damn about Red. He even forgot that I killed him off.
Referenced Strips:
- BS Comics #8: I Have No Ego
- BS Comics #12: Clock Climbers
- BS Comics #20: In His World
- BS Comics #36: Final Fox - Part 3
- BS Comics #38: Fruitless Whining
- BS Comics #43: Red Shirt Romance
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Comments: 63
As much as I love the real Wario... I really love yours too!!
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Oh noez, I agree with Wario 
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MUAHAHAHAHA....but he isnt dead...he wasnt by that portal thing...with link and fox...nope hes falling forever...and ever...and ever...slowly going insane...or you forgot you killed him off in 50...but you must be being afected by some force to casue thiss....or your subconcious has a mind of its own...INSANITY..>JOIN US JOIN US JOIN US
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The only reason Red wasn't in Comic #50 is because I only have three controllers.
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so he was offscreen allegedly
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k then taken into account
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tl;dr version: The author sucks.
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He's out to get fox lol
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Because I'm writing him, and that's exactly what I'm like!
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lol, i mean he is so Dumb in the games, or he looks it, but when you put it on paper, he sounds so smart...is this because you feel sorry for him, but you are covering it up saying you are just like him....
....never mind, I just confuzed myself now...
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He's so dumb in the games, but I made him smart here because I felt like it. Wario complains about his characterization in this very comic.
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Lol, I see....
Argh. GCSE is so depressing. Especially Spanish, Math, Chemistry and Physics are okay.
Did you finish High school?
If you did. Was GCSE so depressing...?
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one of his complaints...he made wario and ice climbers completely backwards
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I'm Canadian. I need not do these "GCSE"s you speak of.
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Lol. i like Canada. I live in UK. Stupid place....with their stupid goverment. I'd rather live in Canda with my Grandma or America with my Aunties.
In the Uk there r 6 different stages.
Nursery 2-5yrs
Infants 4-7yrs Yrs0-2 Key Stage 1
Jnrs 7-11yrs Yrs3-6 Key Stage 2
Secondary/High School 11-16yrs Yrs7-11 Key Stage 3-4
College 16-19yrs(roughly)
University
Basically, to get in to High school you need to SATs in yr 6. How well you do determines which school you get into. To get into College, you need to do GCSEs in yr 10-11. Tt into get into Uni, you need to do A levels. To finish Uni, you need to do Degrees and/or PhDs.
Im doing GCSEs and i'm really stressed right now but that doesn't stop me from drawing.
I exhausted you didn't I?
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I have very little idea what you just said. 
It seems simpler over here.
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yes, I agree. It must be easier.
My art: [link]
Please comment
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LOLZ!!!
These comics are the insane bright point of my week, sad as that may seem.
'Characters writing themselves'... I have that problem (or blessing) all the time. Course, it comes to the point where they actually being to think and reason for themselves, and then it's just gone too far... Like Wario here.
two-part comics are funny, especially when they're unintentinal 
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Oh noes~ The stories taking a life on of it's own? XD
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Every time Wario appears in these comics he obliterates the fourth wall. This is nothing new.
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Really? "Well done"?
...Okay! I'm good with that!
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That's 'cause he is!
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nice
especially the part about Red in gold and silver
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I felt that was a bit of an out-of-character part, to be honest.
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Read carefully. Remember there is no fourth wall.
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WHAT IS THIS FOURTH WALL YOU SPEAK OF.
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Absolutely non-existent!
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Darn it, I hate late movements. You're good by the way.
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Thank you.
Get ready fore hell.
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