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notsovulnerable — .Beyond the Violet
Published: 2009-10-01 03:06:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description As you cling to the final moments of September,
I’ll take hold of the breeze in the sky as tree branches
suffer seizures around me. As I watch their children and nieces and nephews float
gently to the concrete like dead irony, I’ll smile and laugh with myself.
Oh, what beautiful colors.

When I feel your presence or suspect a poltergeist cut-out I’ll
shave off my corneas and wallow in the wonders of black-and-white T.V sets.
I’ll make my mouth dance to the sound of your frown and
your dirty nails and your kidnapped smile until your smile is all that remains.

Oh, but what beautiful colors.
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Comments: 13

GlitteringMoondust [2009-10-06 11:20:24 +0000 UTC]

you never cease to amazing me.

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notsovulnerable In reply to GlitteringMoondust [2009-10-06 23:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks darling.

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GlitteringMoondust In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-10-13 07:17:59 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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fakingasoul [2009-10-02 03:18:40 +0000 UTC]

you use such great imagery to convey what you are feeling. it is amazing. it makes me happy lol

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notsovulnerable In reply to fakingasoul [2009-10-02 22:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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fakingasoul In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-10-03 03:27:02 +0000 UTC]

welcome very much

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notsovulnerable In reply to fakingasoul [2009-10-03 04:25:25 +0000 UTC]

:]

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TerryTerryTerry [2009-10-01 21:38:07 +0000 UTC]

shave off my corneas

Ick... that line makes me shiver.

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notsovulnerable In reply to TerryTerryTerry [2009-10-01 23:06:32 +0000 UTC]

...Shivers are good.

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TerryTerryTerry In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-10-02 06:19:57 +0000 UTC]

Definitely.
Powerful writing when you can make someone get the shivers.

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notsovulnerable In reply to TerryTerryTerry [2009-10-02 22:11:57 +0000 UTC]

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oneofthose-rachels [2009-10-01 05:07:03 +0000 UTC]

"As you cling to the final moments of September,
I’ll take hold of the breeze in the sky as tree branches
suffer seizures around me."=
i love your descriptions (:

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notsovulnerable In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2009-10-01 23:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so much.

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