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this is far-fetched enough alreadyenough already
this is
enough of this it doesn’t make any
sense I’m insecure enough
as it
is this is
confusing am I confusing you?
I’m confused I cannot explicate
I can’t even illuminate the
room in my bedroom in the house
on the street above the sky
I cannot make sense of this it has no
substance no meaning my words these
words are implicated
complications
bedside lamps produce but a flicker in dreams
of happy light but mere lamps
are no match for
shady recollections of fixated lust
and want and need and
confusion but any
way, the point is I’m confused.
this is implausible enough already
enough already
this is
enough of this it doesn’t make any
sense I’m doubtful enough
as it
is this is
confusing I’m confusing you aren’t I?
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Comments: 10
fakingasoul [2009-08-17 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]
goodness! how on earth did you write such a thing? this had to take some effort
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notsovulnerable In reply to fakingasoul [2009-08-17 22:46:44 +0000 UTC]
A little, yes.
But I didn't want to work on it too hard for fear of it making too much sense.
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GlitteringMoondust [2009-07-29 18:34:01 +0000 UTC]
I love this, it's beautiful, and incredibly emotive as always.
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notsovulnerable In reply to GlitteringMoondust [2009-07-29 22:40:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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