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Published: 2009-07-26 23:18:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description this is far-fetched enough already
enough already
this is

enough of this it doesn’t make any
sense I’m insecure enough
as it
is this is
confusing am I confusing you?

I’m confused I cannot explicate
I can’t even illuminate the
room in my bedroom in the house
on the street above the sky

I cannot make sense of this it has no
substance no meaning my words these
words are implicated
complications

bedside lamps produce but a flicker in dreams
of happy light but mere lamps
are no match for
shady recollections of fixated lust
and want and need and
confusion but any

way, the point is I’m confused.

this is implausible enough already
enough already
this is

enough of this it doesn’t make any
sense I’m doubtful enough
as it
is this is
confusing I’m confusing you aren’t I?
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Comments: 10

fakingasoul [2009-08-17 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]

goodness! how on earth did you write such a thing? this had to take some effort

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notsovulnerable In reply to fakingasoul [2009-08-17 22:46:44 +0000 UTC]

A little, yes.
But I didn't want to work on it too hard for fear of it making too much sense.

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fakingasoul In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-08-18 00:20:45 +0000 UTC]

haha! true that

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GlitteringMoondust [2009-07-29 18:34:01 +0000 UTC]

I love this, it's beautiful, and incredibly emotive as always.

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notsovulnerable In reply to GlitteringMoondust [2009-07-29 22:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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TerryTerryTerry [2009-07-28 15:01:04 +0000 UTC]

This is confusing...
..but good.

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notsovulnerable In reply to TerryTerryTerry [2009-07-28 21:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you.

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TerryTerryTerry In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-07-28 23:21:27 +0000 UTC]

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xDeadwithoutMusic [2009-07-26 23:49:52 +0000 UTC]

i like this. it makes me think...

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notsovulnerable In reply to xDeadwithoutMusic [2009-07-27 02:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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