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Description I know most people, when they’re mad, they punch a wall, or scream into a pillow, or write an extremely rude letter to the said person who made their day a bad one. I punched a wall once. It hurt so I don’t do that anymore.
My version of stress-relief is to run as swiftly as I can nurture from my knees all the way around my block.
The song my old ripped smelly sneakers sing is wonderful. I think maybe one day someone will think to record that song and sell it and make money from inventing a new genre of music. Or perhaps somebody already has? I don’t know. But if they said they invented this they’d be lying  because it has been here; I hear it every day. Well, on days I’m mad, anyway.
Sometimes, when I run, people look at me funny, and mosttimes I wonder why they stare. My mother has always told me it’s not polite to stare. Or point. Or laugh.
I don‘t care. I think I probably would have cared when I was twelve, but I’m thirteen now and adults say teenagers aren’t supposed to care about anything; so I act like I don’t but I do.
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Comments: 10

aerialsindisguise [2009-05-06 20:52:53 +0000 UTC]

woo woo
this sounds like it's written by a professional author
wiiinnn

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notsovulnerable In reply to aerialsindisguise [2009-05-06 23:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I wrote it just to try out a more "sophisticated" style, if you will. Apparently that was a good move.

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aerialsindisguise In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-05-06 23:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it really came out well.
I'm trying that, but I get too caught up in my little kid writing, lol.

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notsovulnerable In reply to aerialsindisguise [2009-05-07 03:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Lol Yeah,me too. Did you notice the horrible combination of 'kid style' and 'sophisticated' in Sidewalk Symphony? Yeah.
I definately need to work on that.

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aerialsindisguise In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-05-07 20:57:11 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah
the fact that it's about shoes is the kiddy part, but you did a good job on using big words and stuff
i have to work on a new poem, make it amazing (yn)

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notsovulnerable In reply to aerialsindisguise [2009-05-08 00:57:56 +0000 UTC]

oo, can't wait to see! I'm sure it will be amazing

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aerialsindisguise In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-05-08 01:21:14 +0000 UTC]

haha
yeah i'm working on it now, it's kinda evil xD

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phillGH [2009-05-06 11:27:10 +0000 UTC]

gah, another thing that describes how we're going to feel in the future...i hate it when the only thing we have to reminisce is pictures, yearbooks, memories, and of course smelly shoes....this is awesome....but i'm going to hate looking back on my past =/

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notsovulnerable In reply to phillGH [2009-05-06 23:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I agree. I don't enjoy looking back to my past either. Not because it is painful to remember, but for the simple reason there is no way to physically revisit those moments. But, alas, it's what makes us what we are. If we don't have our past, what does that make us? Definately not human. Am I right?

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phillGH In reply to notsovulnerable [2009-05-07 00:22:36 +0000 UTC]

you are right.

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