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Published: 2018-09-02 23:15:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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Trying to draw some art examplesfor commission, offers and i don't know
Art Program: FireAlpaca
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You should probably make the arms longer next time, and her chin a little bigger. Because it's fantasy, you can be a little more leniant with these things, but the tail, assuming it's attached to her tail bone, looks like it'd be too big to fit there, and um her tail looks like it's floating at her knees (either that or her knees are on the ground) Lastly, this is just my opinion, but the colors, orange and white, are a little monotone and boring, but they do work. Um this is my first time critiquing like this but I hope it helps?
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Thank you this is my first critique and one of the things is that I only keep two main colour because if it's too much then it's harder to look at, it's take a long time, it's kinda ugly
for example
I really didn't like this piece and it take me the longnest time to figure out why, and i believe because it's bit distracting and too much colours it's just does not clash,
also take quite long because each colour is a layer, each colour I have to shade
also that why i'm keeping "main" colour to two only
Also this was going to be a fullbody and the tail wasn't going to be like that but I got lazy
and thank man.
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