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Published: 2014-06-29 20:10:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 410; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Click image to enlarge and see full resolutionI know Frozen is getting old but I'm really not sorry XD
So, this is my first try drawing something this detailed digitally. The anatomy and shading are bad I know :'D but it's so hard to edit on that program and I got really lazy. I guess she was supposed to be sitting in kind of a twisted but cool position but it turned out awkward and different from what I'd intended ;u;
I really want a tablet after this omg. And Photoshop.
Please leave constructive comments!
Time: several centuries of procrastination
Layers: I think I ended with 4? I kept merging them so idk
Tools: MyPaint with a mouse. I'm such a noob :'D
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Omg, excuse me for comment stalking but I was reading through the comments and I must say-
I think this would be worth way more than 30-50 points; this looks more like 200-300 points, perhaps even 400. Your style is beautiful, and for a first time with a detailed digital drawing, this came out really great. I especially like how you made the fur on this, and I personally think you did really good with the anatomy.
I'm really amazed this was done with a mouse rather than a tablet; kudos to you~!
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Really? ;o; Thank you! This means so much to me!
Thanks for the watch too!
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A critique? Ha I'll try XD so I absolutely love how you shaded this, especially how you didn't draw a million hairs on every single part of the body. You put enough so that you know fur is there, but it's not overwhelming. The anatomy is perfect for what you're trying to do here, with more of a wolf-like body instead of a puppy's. Often people draw legs really close to the chest, but if you see these pictures here: www.firstpeople.us/pictures/wo…
media.ktvb.com/images/470*264/…
,You can see that the legs actually sit farther back on the body. I've tried to draw it like this but it's really hard to draw actual wolf anatomy without it looking awkward, so congrats on that ^u^ something to improve... I actually can't find anything wrong with this, haha XD but I guess if you're trying to make it more realistic then don't make such bold outlines? That's the best I can do, sorry. And as for an adoptable, I think it would be super cute as one, but maybe not Elsa. I don't think it has enough Elsa features to be considered Elsa, but I think it's design looks cute in its own way. 
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Sorry for the late reply, kind of got lazy about my messages XD
Yay I'm glad you like the fur, because I do see some people who either try to draw every hair, or outline every single clump of fur darkly and it's overwhelming to the eyes D:
Thanks for the references! I was kind of worried about the anatomy haha XD
I'm not trying for realism so I think the outlines are okay c:
And ok thanks
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o! I think I have a critique. Maybe the shoulders and head are too far from the lower body? Is is still adorable though!
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Well, the lower body is relatively farther from the viewer and the posture is pretty upright, also Elsa has a slim build and if I moved the lower body higher she'd be a furball
Thanks!
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im not good at telling whats wrong with pictures XDD
ill try though ;w;
ok i like this like omg
o m g
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(its amaze XDD)
XDD
the lower body looks a bit small though
is it supposed to be that small but it just looks strange to me
i dont know if its the upper body thats too large or the lower body thats too small but yeah XD
also the front legs at the top maybe should be like closer to the chest ?? i dont know how to explain
i dont really pay attention to like dogs body proportions so i really dont know how its supposed to look but to me it looks strange
im not sure a dog/wolfs body can bend around that way????? o:
and maybe the eyes could be just a teeny bit smaller
i think it looks really good but thats just what i saw idk ;v;
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Yes the lower body is extremely awkward I agree XD I think it might not be so much the size as the pose though, but I got too lazy to fix it XD
I'm not sure what you mean about the front legs o:
and yeah like I said the pose didn't come out the way I wanted it to ;u;
The style isn't realistic though so I think the eyes can be that size hehe ouo
Thanks
this is why you shouldn't be lazy like me and not use a reference for something so detailed XD
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i have no idea about the legs XD
i dont really pay attention to dog/wolf legs and stuff i dont know XD
and your welcome o v o
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haha ok XD
do you think I should make it an adoptable?
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How many points do you think it's worth? Liz said 30-50 c:
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im not good at deciding how many points adopts should be XD
ill just go with what liz said i guess XD
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haha ok XD
except not a lot of people are willing to pay that much ;u;
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woahwoahwoah. you don't use a tablet?!! how? teach me your ways ;o; this is amazing !!!
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I wish I had a tablet XD half the time I spent on it was pressing the undo button :'D
Thanks
Could you critique this? Like tell me what's good and what can be improved c:
Also, do you think I should make it an adoptable?
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AMAZING
I'm terrible at drawing things in detail and shading is murder :'D
but this is really good ouo
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Thanks : D
and yeah it does take some practice XD which is why I probably shouldn't have tried to do something so detailed with a mouse omg about half of the "practice" from this was pressing the undo button XD did you notice I used like 3 different methods for drawing the fur ouo so indecisive XD
What are some things that are good about it and that can be improved?
Also, do you thing I should make it an adoptable?
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That's up to you, but I think it would make a cute adopt ouo
Ok time to try to give actual useful feedback XD
Maybe you could make the blue fur fade into the tan fur a little more gradually? That's just my opinion but I think it would look cooler that way c: (haha no pun intended //shot)
You have shadows on the tail but maybe you could add a second layer of darker shadows like you did on the neck. It would give it more depth.
Maybe you could add more details to the eyes? They're fine the way they are since dog eyes don't really have that much detail to them but if you want you could add more shadows to it and maybe strips of lighter blue. (I'm just so used to anime eyes forgive me XD)
If you were trying to make the curved position better, I'd suggest having the right leg (our right when looking at the drawing) further back then the left leg and maybe even slightly turned to the right.
And that's all I have to say 8D I hope it was helpful X3
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okays c: how much do you think it's worth? Liz said 30-50 points
for the fur, it was supposed to be her dress, that's why I didn't blend it so much o: and lol omg I used the same pun with Liz's comment XD
yeah the tail is awkward : D I literally finished it yesterday so I was tired and kind of just wanted to get done and post it already XD good suggestion though
Yes, I would have done that but the actual blue parts of the eyes are so small it wouldn't make a difference with this image size ;u;
and yeah, I was trying to do that with the legs, but it doesn't really work out with the way the front legs are positioned ;u;
thanks for the feedback
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Oh ok, then never mind about the fur c:
and lol XD
No problem ^.^
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I like how the eyes and paws look. This looks so real that it could just jump out of my screen and be a real, air breathing canine.
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Thanks
Do you think I should make it an adoptable?
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You're welcome XDDDDDD
You could make it an adoptable if you want XDD
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lol so many mouths "XDDDDDD"
and okie c: how much do you think it's worth?
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XDD
Maybe around 30-50 points. Idk
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okays ouo
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