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Published: 2012-10-26 18:19:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 748; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 2
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Ono! There's already death and it's only the third page!
Old page numero trois, after this it gets a bit more recent but still a few months old, but almost there!
Hai Willow, nice to see you too. What could possibly be so important you had to go all the way over there to bother your sis. Hm?
Buttmunchers! >:C
Fun fact: We call my uncle "Uncle Grubbie" thus the random name on the bag.
Also I need to admit before people ask, I use guides for most of my backgrounds because I'm too lazy to draw them by hand and if I did I would never get pages done, so yeah.
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Hurrah! Willow finally arrives with her touchably fuzzy hair! Seriously I just want to touch it last panel. Is that wrong? 8'I
And the taboo shipping can begin... BD
Good gracious, what's with these suicidal aliens? Come on man, death by vehicle is not the way to go!
Also I totes want me some Grubbies. Sounds like the tastiest, healthiest food joint around.
Shading and layouts and whatnot are really nice this page. I like the variety of angles it's shown in, like the upview from the news cam and also with the third panel, and the zoom in of the hand on the second to last. Variety is nice and tasty! I'm thiiinkiiing your balloons could either be a little bit smaller, or your text smaller, as sometimes it does seem a bit large to me. I'm thinking more for the text. It's getting a little close to being constricted of breath (too close to the ballooon lines, in other words) like in panel 4. It's not really THAT close or anything, but just making the text a px or 2 smaller would give it more space, and make a world of difference.
More paaageeeees, gotta find out what's so important
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Hooray for fuzzy hair! Apparently I like to go crazy with drawing it 8'I
NO.
Man he just had a lot of problems at home, man. Maybe he just couldn't stand the plot so far so he made one himself.
Oh the name is so misleading, it's totally the healthiest low-fat food joint in the city!
Variety is best served with salsa! Oh I see what you mean! I played around with the text on the next page and it totally made a difference so thanks for pointing that out for me >:U
EVENTUALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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Owait, I'm confused... this takes place in the future, am I right? Or something along those lines?
drgh.. I be attack of the ignorant
Anyway, I like how this page is setup, particularly, the different angles and perspectives. The close-up of da hand^^
Also, I am loving Willow's hair, and all its curlllzzz
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Yup, something along the lines of that! 
Thanks ^^ Pff, I love Willow's hair too
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Oh okay^^ sorry if I came off as too 
Curly epicness^^
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Ohai there sister person! Walter, you should be happy someone is keeping you company in your overtime!
This page is good, only critique I can offer is that Walter's pose in the second to last panel is a bit boring. Her arms are just sort of hanging limp by her side, and she hasn't really got any expressiveness in her face or posture. I really don't know what sort of inflection you were going for with Walter's question. Is she annoyed? Confused? Worried?
It might have worked better if she was facing the shelf, maybe still pushing the box forward, and only her head was turned towards Willow, with an annoyed or confused expression.
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For real, man. Gotta stop being grumpy.
Alright thanks for pointing it out! As said this is an older page, but I'll work on the body language more XD
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Thanks! 
Anybody can! You just have to BELIIIIEEEEEVVVEE
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xD Thank you very much 
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