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Published: 2007-05-04 16:49:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Couldn't really think of a tittle for this one... and please excuse the shite background - I ran out of inspiration.But, wow, it's finally done! OMG, it took long.
But I reckon I've got the hang of this style of colouring now, so all my colour work SHOULD look like this.
Please, give lots of comments, I want to know what I can still improve on (except the hair ¬.¬)
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Purdy thangs! You've got the manga eyes down pat and the hair is good too. Needs a little more colour variation in it though. The purple haired girl needs to have either much less lineart on her blouse-or lots more. The cleavage is a little too high but then most Manga-maids are pneumatic to the point of burstin' out all over!
Nice job.
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Thanks a lot
I know about the colour thing though... I just couldn't think of a matching colour for the coat of the purple haired one
I hope I can get more practice in at colouring some time soon
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I like the anatomy on the blonde, you did a good job with her pose and the stomache, I also like her clothes too. You also did really nicely on their arms the both of them and their hands as well, especially the girl on the right (my right) I agree about her chest too but I cannot talk since I cannot draw male's correctly. But all in all, you did very well. Keep up the good work.
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thank you very much for the positive feedback
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yeah, backgrounds are hard!
be careful - the heads are "missing" volume. if you look at a person's head from profile angle, you can see how the back of the head comes out. i can't really explain it well >.<
and the girl on the right's breasts are drawn incorrectly. boob aren't smushed together that tightly, unless the clothing is really really tight (lots of strain/wrinkles drawn in the chest-region of the shirt) for the kind of shirt you drew, there would be cleavage, but not so tightly packed. ^///^ it sounds so wrong....but....heh. hope you can understand what i mean. lol
i really like the hair!! you have a good sense of gravity where the hair falls. i need to work on that ^ ^;
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Yeah, I know what you're talking about
but I've only discovered it after it was inked, and we all know what that means
Anyway, thanks for the critisism, I'll bear it in mind
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no problem. just returning the favor ^^ you can't get good critique until you first give it to others
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very good, both hair, eyes and shading came out well
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thanks very much buddeh
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shut up, you big sissy
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don't make me kill you
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i will call in the russian mafia
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ppfft, like you know anyone from the mafia
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I have been playing mercenary's, my weapons come FROM the mafia
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