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Published: 2010-06-29 04:48:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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You're speeding straight towards a dead end,but you won't turn the wheel my friend,
you've been round the block a time or two,
and I've always tried to see you through.
You've got some knowledge, want to go,
but that won't turn you to a pro.
Cut the wheel and take this turn,
you still have so much more to learn,
so many miles left to drive,
so please make sure you stay alive.
This life isn't some grand old race,
enjoy the scenes and slow your pace,
and if you decide to take your time,
I'll see you at the finish line.
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Comments: 2
it could be a nation, a CEO,
a reckless buddy, a politico -
[you're speaking to, Frank],
or yourself, naturally.
it's a message with a good delivery.
i like it [of course].
length is fine i'd say, unless there's
more you want to add. maybe a bit
of tweaking - maybe not.
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So many people live like this and it's really interesting to see it put into such a brilliant way. The final line gives a sense of hope too. Amazing job!
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