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Published: 2011-07-25 04:01:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 731; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 7
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Description GOODNESS THIS TOOK ABOUT 4 HOURS TO DO, AND IT STILL BOTHERS ME

ah, well. Anyway, this is Mokumoku's old platoon.

Grey and red/orange male -> Mokumoku
Red female -> Dunana
Blue male -> Mechacha
Yellow male -> Bishishi

NO ONE'S INTERESTED IN HEARING A STORY but I'M TYPING IT ANYWAY:

So, Mokumoku didn't always look like he does now (I'm still trying to decide what to do with it but I'm having some trouble); Back a few centuries, he was just an 18-year-old Sergeant Major leading a platoon. He grew up with everyone in the platoon while in military school, and his best friend was Mechacha. Mokumoku also had a sort of crush on Dunana, who had mutual feelings for him. Bishishi, however, was jealous of him; Not just because Moku was already a Sergeant Major at a young age, but because it felt like he was trying to steal Duna away from him (Bishishi had a huge crush on her as well). So, during a mission, he 'accidently' sent his leader and peer to Earth, making him land in the mountains somewhere in Russia. They could not retrieve him because it was too dangerous to send the ship face-first into a fearsome snow storm. Returning to home planet, they didn't hear back from Moku for a long time. Mechacha blamed himself, assuming that faulty wiring caused his friend's fate and knowing he couldn't survive in such weather. Bishishi felt only a small twinge of guilt, but it went to the back of his mind because he got what he wanted and eventually married Dunana, quitting the military and pursuing other interests.

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Art and characters © ~Numa-Numa-Shadow
Keroro Gunso © Mine Yoshizaki
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Comments: 44

Andledee [2011-10-16 13:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Owch, tragic how that worked out. O_O
(love the pic btw)

MokuMoku need a hug. (hugs him)

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raicon1 [2011-07-25 14:13:56 +0000 UTC]

wow that bishishi seems like a jackass

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to raicon1 [2011-07-26 00:51:13 +0000 UTC]

He is. >:U He really is.

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raicon1 In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-26 14:53:12 +0000 UTC]

horrible characters that can come out of a mind. makes me smile

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MaachiKazama [2011-07-25 13:52:24 +0000 UTC]

Aw, finally some Keronians and pictures in general by you again c:> I love the perspective you used on Mokumoku <3 Dang, he looks so hawt XD
And interesting description OuO

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to MaachiKazama [2011-07-26 00:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! OuO

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SentientTaco [2011-07-25 06:49:33 +0000 UTC]

lol heee i love Mechacha, he seems like the most energetic of the bunch <33 Cx
this is fantastic for 4 hours bro, it looks super good! : DDD heck, i takes me all day to do squat xD
i really like the backstory, like Nagogo said, i thought it'd be a regular love triangle but the twist made it awesome!
also Dunana's very bootiful indeed, her blue eyes are mesmerizing OuO and Bishishi you sir, are a mega jerk >:U

your mastery of art and angles makes me feel like i can almost poke Moku *reach* <33 ;3;

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to SentientTaco [2011-07-26 00:50:45 +0000 UTC]

He is actually o:

Thank you very much!

I am not a master at anything, but that made me all warm 'n' fuzzy inside~! >w<

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Latios [2011-07-25 05:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Mister Love, still as awesome as ever.

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to Latios [2011-07-25 05:27:12 +0000 UTC]

Heehee! Thanks, Latios!

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Latios In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 11:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Mhm, you're welcome, Shadow.

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StarChaser94 [2011-07-25 04:13:40 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY I get to see his old platoon C:l

Okay first thing..... MOKUMOKU YOU ARE AMAZING. So are the rest of them! Besides Bishishi. He's a meanie >:C .....Bishishi sounds like bishie lD I love Mechacha so much <3 It could be the blue, or the wrench... but I love him~ And Dunana's pretty! LOL TANU CAN'T COMPETE WITH HER I love her little mole riiight there! *pokes screen*

I also love your style. Very much.

VERY MUCH SO.

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to StarChaser94 [2011-07-25 04:17:49 +0000 UTC]

YUSH, I FINALLY GOT OFF MY LAZY BUTT AND DREW THEM

MOKU APPRECIATES WHAT YOU SAID. Bishishi is supposed to sounds like bishie. HE'S SUPPOSED TO BE A HANDSOME JERK FOR A REASON. Oh come on, Tanu's perfect for Moku D:> He loves her way more than Duna actually... Besides, Duna's supposed to be dead now anyway.

Your comment made me giggle and all warm and fuzzy insiiiiide~! Thank you!

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StarChaser94 In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:42:37 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFYEEY~ CB

I FEEL SO LOVED OUO. Lol I thought so... I WAS RIGHT. C:l But that's another thing Moku and Duna have in common!

Yaaay my comment's awesome~! >w< No problem~ <333

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to StarChaser94 [2011-07-25 04:56:49 +0000 UTC]

CCCCCCCB

YOU SHOULD! And yes, you were :3 But Dunana went to Heaven! Moku's kind of stuck on Earth!

^u^ *huggles!*

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kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:05:05 +0000 UTC]

SO COOL!!!!

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:05:31 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU! >W<

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:07:40 +0000 UTC]

Tralala: *senses Moku* Hm? Who's there?

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:10:53 +0000 UTC]

*At first, he wasn't visible yet his presence was nearby. Slowly, a faint form started to appear to her left, and a curious yet sad pair of eyes looked at her.*

... Hello.

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:12:56 +0000 UTC]

*She turns behind her, following the sound of his voice, due to her being blind. But she also sensed that he was depressed.*

... Hi, hey, a-are you okay?

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm all right. A little sad, but that's normal for me... Anyway, I'm Mokumoku. Who are you?

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:19:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh.... I-I'm Tralala.... My platoon suggested me a day off, so that's why I'm here....

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Your platoon?

*He floated a little closer to her, and reached out his hand to hers.*

... You're blind, aren't you...?

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:37:11 +0000 UTC]

!!!!! H-How did you know?

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:25:57 +0000 UTC]

!!!!! H-How did you know?

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Your eyes veer off to the side a little, so they're not looking straight at me. It's all right with me, so I don't mind it... But how did you manage to get here by yourself?

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 04:47:40 +0000 UTC]

I have pyschic powers. I sense the area around me. I sensed your aura and found you....

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 04:59:29 +0000 UTC]

I see... That's cool. Do you know what people look like too, or do you only see their aura?

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 05:00:37 +0000 UTC]

I can only see the aura, just as well as injuries on their bodies, that's why I'm the medic in my platoon.

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 05:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah... All right, then. I guess that's a useful ability to have.

*He looked down at her hand and slowly wrapped his hands around it. His hands were somewhat cold.*

... I think I can sense your aura... I don't have a strong psychic sense or anything, but I feel it faintly...

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 05:07:40 +0000 UTC]

*She noticed how cold his hands were.* M-Mr.Moku, your hands.... They're cold like ice...

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 05:18:47 +0000 UTC]

O-oh! *He pulled his hands away and started to rub them nervously.* ... I apologize...

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 05:20:33 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, they just startled me is all... But why are your hands freezing like that...? It doesn't feel too cold in here... Well, I have a poncho on so that's probaly why....

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-25 05:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Don't be startled or anything, but I am a ghost. I died in a cold place, so maybe that's why I feel so cold...

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 23:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.... Interesting... *She shivers a little bit.* Okay I take back over it's not cold in here.... I-It's freezing....

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-26 00:15:56 +0000 UTC]

... Sorry. I can leave if you want...

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-26 00:16:57 +0000 UTC]

No You're fine.... So.... How old were you when you died....?

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-26 00:45:19 +0000 UTC]

I was 18 when it happened. It's been very long since then...

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-26 00:47:20 +0000 UTC]

!!!!! Wow.... You were so young.... B-But not as young as my sister.... She scaraficed her life for me....

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to kittens4jc [2011-07-26 00:51:43 +0000 UTC]

... I'm sorry to hear that...

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-26 00:52:31 +0000 UTC]

It's alright.... I-I need to forget it but ut's very hard for me.....

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kittens4jc In reply to Numa-Numa-Shadow [2011-07-25 05:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.... Interesting... *She shivers a little bit.* Okay I take back over it's not cold in here.... I-It's freezing....

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deckhandnagogo [2011-07-25 04:04:02 +0000 UTC]

((I think the backstory is pretty interesting! It's like one of those typical love triangles you see floating around, but you made it have this unexpected twist where the villain gets what he wants rather than the hero.

Also, I caught this on the front page. XD))

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Numa-Numa-Shadow In reply to deckhandnagogo [2011-07-25 04:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! It was how I imagined it in my mind. Thank you!

... REALLY?? THAT IS AWESOME! ;U;

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