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Numisma — Purge
Published: 2005-06-28 01:11:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 175; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Bloody, aching fingers scratch at the unrelenting glass in resignation, leaving dark, slimy smears that obscure the view, and she tilts her head back to laugh without humor at her futility. She nearly chokes on her own chortles, gasping and coughing as her voice lilts and wheezes, until she manages to catch her breath once more, only to begin laughing again.  

This insanity is nigh in completion. The walls are solidifying, and soon she will be so drained of spiritual strength that even she will not be able to shatter her crystallized prison.

A deep sigh, and there is a cooling rush throughout her.

Leaning painfully against the curved wall as she holds one hand to her chest, she wonders how such a strange and unwanted prophecy came to unfold this way.

Things weren’t always like this, and her entire knowledgeable life she devoted herself to preventing such a horrid prediction from proving itself true.

How was she to have known she’d completely misunderstood its meaning from the very beginning?

As she quietens, she scowls. Her battle regalia is askew, poking at her, but she is in no position to adjust it for comfort. Quite literally, she muses with disdain as the thing twisted around her tightens considerably, causing her muscles to scream as she grimaces in an attempt to silence a groan. Her stomach lurches at the rancid smell.

There is no way out. No escape.

As a child she was raised to follow the ways of the miko. However, she never would have foretold that she was simply following the thread of fate in doing so. That her own acts of prevention were, in fact, her own undoing.

The prophecy was unavoidable.

She realises this now, a strange, humorless smile curving her lips. The tragedy bemuses her in a sickeningly maddening way. She is only playing her part, and the strings attached to her limbs can somewhat be seen through the steamy mist from her breath as a chill sets through the air.

“In the arms of the ill-intended shall you birth a new wickedness.”

Virginal flesh.

Pure and powerful in body and soul.

Untouched and forever unapproached by man.

Impenetrable by sword or sorcery.

A protectress on many levels.

All of these, in order to protect herself and the fate of the world.

Body shaking, holy powers nearly drained, she grabs hold of the creature’s soul strings once again. She must end this, and purge herself of the darkness that it has placed inside her.

It cannot grow. It will not grow.

She will end this.

It is futile.

This long battle of nights and days on end is finally coming to an end, and her life force is but a whisper now.

With her last breath she reaches out, slipping fully into the arms of the ill-intended, and severs its soul. Lightheaded, she pulls them both deep into herself and shudders her way into death.

Their unholy union is still birthed, expunged from her chest, and from inside their soul prison she watches herself fall away from the twisted mess of limbs left behind. Satisfied with the purging of the wickedness, Midoriko resumes battle inside the Shikon no Tama, hoping that someday far into the centuries she can win. Until then, she will not rest.
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Comments: 7

dragoninu [2005-06-30 01:03:02 +0000 UTC]

As always, Numisma, you write beautiful. The points of view and the choice of characters and what they are feeling (which might all be the same thing - having a day where my mind isn't working) are all so painfully heartwrenching. I love it all!

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MorbidFairy [2005-06-28 13:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow Intersting werid that it didn't place..

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darkelf19 [2005-06-28 02:31:59 +0000 UTC]

I still can't believe this didn't place at all. I thought it was excellent! An intresting look into an often overlooked character.

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Numisma In reply to darkelf19 [2005-06-29 08:41:42 +0000 UTC]

i think the problem was that I was up against competition that was more likely to get votes from certain participating members, and also the fact that several people with good taste just didn't happen to vote this time, and said people may have ended up voting for it. who knows. i'm just glad that it got more votes than the two it DID get more votes than. *pouts*

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darkelf19 In reply to Numisma [2005-06-29 15:53:13 +0000 UTC]

awww. *huggles* Yes I've noticed that. It seems sometimes it's more of a popularity contest than anything else. *sighs* I haven't placed in a while. Apparently I'm too angsty for them. LOL

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Numisma In reply to darkelf19 [2005-06-30 00:22:49 +0000 UTC]

well, in all honesty, i think your entries have room for improvement; they're not bad, but sometimes they're a little flat or awkwardly worded or they need some oomph, something to really make them come alive. plus, the lack of spacing between paragraphs is a major eyesore. but i'll tell you one thing - your entries are better than the mindless drivel Kelly (cowgirled) writes. i would rather see something of yours place over her stuff anyway.

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darkelf19 In reply to Numisma [2005-06-30 01:53:39 +0000 UTC]

See at least your honest. No one can improve without a real critque. Thank you! I'll try at improving them. LOL and at least I can say they're not mindless drabble.

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