HOME | DD
Published: 2005-05-28 06:07:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
Redirect to original
Description
He stands at the edge, looking in. This could be me someday, he thinks. He has returned, and soon, not soon enough, he leaves, rings jingling atop his shakujou. He is only visiting this scar upon the world, after all.He doesn’t like the permanence of staying in one place, which is what ultimately awaits him somewhere down the road, waving to him with the fervor of an old friend he hasn’t seen since long ago. As long as his feet keep moving, as long as he wanders far, making the best of time as it slowly shrinks, then all would be well.
If only the hole in his hand would shrink as well.
With wandering feet come wandering hands and a wandering mind, as if wanderlust of this sort were contagious or even expected. They don’t always intercommunicate; each of these nomads is pretty much independent.
His feet travel with the others, hell-bound along half-aimless paths. His hands slip into forbidden territory, often along treacherous backsi- backroads. A simple guide keeps him from straying too far. As for his thoughts, what his mind whispers to him with worry, he’d rather not stoke the fire. There are enough troubles among them all without sharing his own aloud. He hides them behind silence and a smile.
Each step is another moment of conflict left unsaid, stepped upon but only partially crushed underfoot. He finds it easier to leave these trampled worries barely alive and continue on toward what awaits him. He wanders through life, pressing toward removing the curse from his father’s father’s so-called sins. Ahead of him lies a lonely path and he might not reach the end, disappearing, marring the trail with a crater.
His heart doesn’t wander, though. Its waver is a mirage; its destination is her heart.
Related content
Comments: 4
dragoninu [2005-06-05 10:54:08 +0000 UTC]
I don't often run off and read strange fanfics ( I mean fanfictions by authors who I don't know) but I agree with the other person who commented here.
I used to be such a lurker! But I decided to comment on this. I love this piece. Especially when the backsi- backroads came up and the last line His heart doesn’t wander, though. Its waver is a mirage; its destination is her heart. This I like as well.
Oh, if I could only feel this way about my stuff. . .
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Numisma In reply to dragoninu [2005-06-05 18:16:42 +0000 UTC]
thanks.
but i thought you were on my friends list at LiveJournal ^ ^;; wouldn't that make me not a stranger?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
dragoninu In reply to Numisma [2005-06-07 21:45:37 +0000 UTC]
Umm, yeah!
There was a comment about another author who got some award (I'm not very competitive, so I don't keep track. . . ) and the person who made that comment said that you should have gotten it and what I meant was that I don't often read other fanfics by people I don't know so I haven't read that OTHER one, but I still believed that YOU should have gotten it. I didn't mean that YOU were a stranger! Sorry for the confusion! ! !
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
MorbidFairy [2005-05-28 19:30:02 +0000 UTC]
wow no wonder it got 3rd place ^^ it should of got even better
👍: 0 ⏩: 0




