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"You brats are gloomy, where is your enthusiasm? What's going on?" Dadan also sensed something wrong, "It's three days since you haven't met that girl, what is she called again?"
"Ace, maybe we'd better ---" Sabo suggested.
"She would come to us if she wanted." Ace interrupted him with his arms held, staring at the pouring rain. Although there were few rainy days, they didn't enjoy rain at all.
One week later
Staring at the black-and-white photo astonished, she heard people talking.
"That wicked girl was finally gone. It's said that she was taken by the sea." She fell down on her knees.
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"Darling, baby needs you."
"Here I come, honey."
In the dark room, still lay a sick woman.
"That cursed girl, how dare she abandon her sick mother. I ...won't forgive ... her ..."
"Mother, I'm back." Acasa stood there, reaching for her.
"You little bitch ... Coming to send me to the death? Huh?" Coughed the woman, "I am not going to die. You death!"
She reached the glass on the bed desk and threw it at Acasa, unfortunately she lost her own balance and fell down, dead.
"Mother? ... mother ... don't ..don't ..."
Rushing steps
"Oh my god, she is a ghost, and she came back to take her poor mother's life!!"
One woman screamed.
"What?! She should be dead! Call the police!"
Another man added, "No, the police won't believe this bullshit."
"Get away, you wicked child!! Never turn up again!"
Run then and never return, there's no home for you, Acasa.
Can I,
Can I still return to them?
Ace...Sabo...Luffy...
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cherry-powa [2014-05-05 18:43:50 +0000 UTC]
"It *has been* three days"
"She would *have* come if she *had* stayed"
"his arms held" maybe you're trying to say "his arms crossed"
"shockedly" doesn't exist, you should try to find another word, maybe an adjective would be better "Staring at the black and white photo, upset," for example
"hearing people talking" => more "she heard people talking/say"
still *laid* a woman
send me to death (without "the")
You death ! => ? "You are going to die !" maybe ?
losing *her* own balance
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NydiaZitrone In reply to cherry-powa [2014-05-06 03:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Yes,my apology.
I invented "shockedly"
I was at my wits'end at that time.
You death!=>"You're like Death to me."Maybe I should have written in capital.
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