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NydiaZitrone — ACASA (ASL x OC) 5. Oath
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That day was a very important day, yes, to welcome the Tenryuubito(Celestial Dragon).
Acasa didn't know what happened during her absence, of course she didn't.
But she knew that the Tenryuubito are scary, even scarier than bad people. Finally she got back to the little cottage.
Things never changed.
She made up her mind to find the trio and to stay with them.
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"Excuse me, where are they?" Acasa asked timidly.
To her surprise, the mountain bandits were all in sadness.
"On the cliff, I guess." Dadan answered her.
"I want to become stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger, stronger... so that I can protect all of them, no one would leave ... "
...
"I'm not gonna die! No matter what! That is a promise ..."
"Em "
..........
"Listen up, Luffy, "Ace swore, "We'll definitely live our life without regret!"
"Em!"
"One day we will be out to the sea and live a free life, one with more freedom than anyone."
"Em!"
......
Acasa heard it all behind the tree.
At the news of Sabo's accident, (though she knew it was never an accident), she cried hard. After hearing the brothers' oath, she knew she had to be strong as well.
"Acasa..."Ace noticed the girl.
Luffy showed the crying face under his straw hat, "Um..."
The girl ran to them and they cuddled together.
We will become stronger and stronger.
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*That day* was *a* very important day
yes, to welcome the tenyruubito => I would rather say "That day was a very important day, the day of the arrival of the Tenryuubito"
the Tenryuubito *were* scary
She *had* made up her mind to find the trio and stay with them *forever* => "from now on" is a present tense expression, just like today, you shouldn't use it in a past tense story
to *her* surprise
were all *sad*
"I want to *get* stronger"
"no one would leave *anymore*"
(though she knew it would never be an accident) => maybe more *could* than "would", like she knew it wasn't actually an accident ?
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You're right.I didn't pay much attention to how to use "from now on"
though she knew it would never be an accident=>"If there should be another death,those dead people should deserve it.And the Tenryuubito will always call it an accident."
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