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NydiaZitrone — ACASA (Ace x OC) 9. First and Last Kiss
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She rushed down stairs and found the room already empty.
"OMG!" He IS important because he is the enemy of Luffy!
A month later
The rookies reached the joint point island. Another thing surprised Acasa was that Luffy beat the Tenryuubito! She was so glad that the crybaby should have made so many achievements. However, just a few days later, to her surprise, the news that Ace was caught in the Impel Down reached her ears. At the same time, the crew of the Straw hat Pirates were divided to different places after a horrifying battle in Sabaody Archipelago.
How could that happen?! Damn that Black-beard! Damn the marines! No doubt Luffy will go to rescue his dear brother. What's worse, there is going to be a WAR.
Clock was ticking by.
....
War was on
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Ice, Fire, Tsunami, Lava ... ...
"Ace--" Luffy was lost at the sight of his brother falling down on his knees.
"I'm sorry I couldn't let you save me properly. Forgive me."
...
"I only have one regret ... that I couldn't see you fulfill your dream... I know you will make it... You are my brother..."
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"You promised, you lair!" "No, I'm not lying..."
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"Even though I am good for nothing and have devil's blood in my veins ... You guys still loved me ... Thank you so much ..."
"A-C-E-!!!!--"
Again she was too late to reach the battlefield.
Thankfully Luffy was possible to survive but she wanted to accompany him.
The body was still warm.
A contented smile wore on his face.
She held his face in her hands and kissed him goodbye for the first and last time.
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"Thank you, Mr. Shanks." Standing in front of tombstone, Acasa removed her last tear.
She was saved by the crew of Shanks on the way to Marineford.
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"Actually she could stay with us. An explorer is okay." Lucky Roo bit his meat.
"She knew what she was doing." The vice-captain said.
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Comments: 7
The rookies *had* reached
Another thing *that* surprised Acasa
the crybaby *had achieved so many things*
*However* just *a* few days later
she heard *in* the news that Ace was *jailed* in Impel Down (without "the")
the crew of *the* Strawhats Pirates were divided *in* different places after *an* horrifying
No doubt Luffy *would* come to rescue his dear brother
What *was* worse *was that* there *would* be a war
falling *to* his knees
you *liar*
Luffy was *able* to survive
a satisfied smile on his face (no "wore")
in front of *the* tombstone, Acasa *wiped* her last tear
she could *have stayed*
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I feel like you skipped through way too many events. I'm not flaming or hating, but I was wondering if you would be interested in collaborating with we to re-write some of the Shabody or Marineford arc?
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Yes,I did skip a lot of events because I thought readers might get bored with those familiar stuff and I didn't believe I was capable of rewriting it well.Besides,to make it more possible(OC's situation),I decided to avoid her presence in big events.
I would be honored to join you if I could help.
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Eh, if you have a good reason for something, i'm fine with it! And if you don't wanna change it s'fine coz its nice as it is! ^w^
I would be the one who is honoured, friend!
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Thank you for your support!
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