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NydiaZitrone โ ACASA (Law x OC) 20. Lie
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Next day
Law entered the operation room to check on her wound. Noticing her sleeping against the wall in sit position, he sighed.
"Acasa ya."
It was his first time that he called her by that name.
She was quite alert to wake up at once.
"...You...What...?"
"I'll explain everything after examining your wound." He was always that calm.
"...Well..."She blushed and turned back to him.
Her heart pounded at a terrific rate in her chest all the time.
"You've been too nervous; it's not good for your recovery."
How could I not?!
"Done." He cleaned the waste.
"Thank you..."She put on her clean clothes beside the pillow.
"Come down for breakfast, I'll tell you what happened."
"Em."
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"You said I was murdered because some strange people wanted to silence me?!"
"Yes." Law answered with hands folded.
"What important information have I got?"
"Maybe in your notebook."
"Notebook?" She remembered it, "Yes! That's the most precious thing to me. Where is it? "
"They took it."
"Oh, my gosh!" Acasa held her head in frustration.
My, my ...oh, noโฆ
"Calm down, Acasa chan. You can make a new start." Shachi tried to comfort her.
"You don't understand, Shachi." After sobbing for a while, she felt nothing was important compared to her life now.
"I know you are an excellent surgeon but HOW did you make some survive after one was stabbed right through the heart. That's impossible!"
Law pinched his brows together and lied, "I arrived in time."
"...Is that so? How did you find me? And if you had known that already, why didn't you stop the whole murder? What's more, where have you been at that time when I bid farewell to the others?! "She leaped to her feet, questioning him.
Law didn't answer any of these questions. He just stood up, which made her lean back because of his height and other strange reasons.
"Come with me." Law caught her wrist and led her into the Captain's room.
Acasa tensed up and blushed again.
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in *sitting* position
either "it was his first time *calling* her by that name" or "it was *the* first time he called her by that name"
she was *so* alerted *that she* woke up
and turned *her* back to him
*Her* heart pounded
You're being to nervous, it's good for your recovery => I guess you want to say that it is NOT good for her recovery right ?
No, it *was* different. For him, this *was* different.
she felt nothing *was* important compared to her life *at that moment*
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Yeah ,I always forget the point.
"It is not good for your recovery "
No,it's different.For him,this is different.=>This is her thought.
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Maybe if it's her thought you should point it out by using "" or ยซยป, or a verb to indicate that she is thinking like she thought, or she wondered or I don't know. You can also put the parts where she's thinking in italics to make it different from the rest, otherwise it seems like it is a part of the description or else.
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