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NydiaZitrone — ACASA (Law x OC) 24. Common Sense
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Acasa finally walked away from the cliff before jumping.
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"Acasa...?!"Jean Bart was surprised to see her up so early since her condition went bad. "Are you okay?"
"I am fine now, don't worry about me."
"Okay ...Then what can I do for you?"
"I need the key to the cockpit's backroom."
"...Why?"
"It's a secret. Please." With a gentle smile.
Even a strong man like him would blush. "Well."
Acasa got into the backroom of cockpit and looked for her "secret".
She left it there before her leaving last time. It was another notebook, precisely her diary. It was a special diary in which recorded all the things about that raccoon face since their first meeting.
Now she wanted to continue this diary as well. She didn't want it to be one of her regrets.
And she knew that she had feelings for him.
"What?! Acasa chan's all right?" Shachi was too happy to hear it. He dashed towards the cockpit, intending giving her a warm hug, but no one was there.
Acasa tiptoed into the Captain's room
She left her note of apologies on his desk. Suddenly she saw the posters of Seven Warlords with "Donquixote Doflamingo" on the top.
She was curious and was about to reach it, but she was caught by someone from behind.
"Ah!"
"Quiet .What are you doing here?"
Law didn't grab her arm. And it was more like a pat because he thought she would feel tense again.
He sat back down on the bedside.
"It seems that you've overcome your mental problems."
"Yeah, I am sorry to cause you so much trouble." She didn't turn around because she glanced that he was topless. She blushed after all.
"Well, is that all? Tiptoeing in and leaving a note?"
"You knew that?!"
"I knew it all."
"Oh, no,..."She slapped herself mentally, "Then goodbye, Trafalgar."
"Wait," He stopped her, "tell me the dream last night, I believe it was the key to your problem."
She still wanted to keep it inside, so she replied in a casual tone, "I think there's no necessity since I am okay now."
"I'm curious, unless you tell me I will feel I am useless as a doctor."
"But you're not a psychiatrist, it's all right. I know you are a good doctor."
"I insist."
Better not outrage him.
"...Okay, like days before, I dreamt about them." It sounded as if she was talking to someone else since Acasa didn't turn to face him.
"Turn around."
Even he was not her Captain. It was impolite to talk to someone in that way.
Acasa leaned against door and looked at the bookshelf next to his bed.
She continued with her explanation, "They finally told me to follow my heart and live a life without regrets ...Yes, that's it."
"...It sounded easy."
"..."She gave him a glare.
"Okay, it's a common sense, isn't?" Finally he went back to that arrogant guy who enjoys sarcasm.
"See you!" She snorted and left.
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a strong man like him *would* be shy
of *the* cockpit
in which *she* recorder all the things
to continue (without "d" ) this diary as well
to be one of *her* regrets
intending *to give her a hug*
but *someone caught her from behind*
her arm for *a* long time
common sense, isn't *it* ?
who *enjoyed* sarcasm
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About character's characteristic,does it have to be past indefinite tense as well ?
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You ask that for the will-would I guess. I must admit I am not perfectly sure of the correction but I'm sure it can't be "will" because will is either a present or a future.
When you write a story in past tenses, the description should always be in simple past. For example, in your story there, you can't describe Law saying "He has black hair and he is tall". It has to be "He had black hair and he was tall".
That's why I think it should be a past tense here as well. Though the sentence doesn't sound very correct to me that way. Maybe it would be better if you found another way to write the complete sentence.
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Well,I'll be more careful next time.
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