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She didn't talk to them that day until she was stopped by Law on her way to her bedroom.
"Fine. If you don't mind feeling nauseous, I'll tell you the truth."
"... No, I'm strong enough after finishing some anatomical books."
"It is, "Law whispered into her ear,"100 hearts."
"..."She choked because the organ thing also his breath sending chill down her spine.
"....You killed 100 people?!" She finally knew his infamous cruelty.
"No, they're alive. Pirates actually." He leaned back and answered her like it was the most normal thing in the world.
"How could that be possible? People couldn't live without hearts!"
"They just do. It's confidential, keep it as a secret. "
"..."She was speechless now. At the same time, she recalled something.
Something about the unsuccessful murder two years ago.
*******
--"How did you make someone survive after he was stabbed right through his heart. That's impossible!"
--"I arrived in time."
*******
"What's on your mind?" Law waved his hand in front of her, "Acasa?"
"You stole my heart..."
She was too shocked before she comprehended another meaning of her words.
"..."Law just grinned and took the chance.
He kissed her.
"That's my answer."
Acasa was completely lost.
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Comments: 4
cherry-powa [2014-05-05 21:09:29 +0000 UTC]
because *of* the thing itself and also his breath sending chillS *down*
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NydiaZitrone In reply to cherry-powa [2014-05-06 12:06:15 +0000 UTC]
I am extremely grateful to you for all your help.I never thought someone would read through my novel that carefully ,sentence by sentence.
I was startled by my mistakes.Also I learnt a lot from them.
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cherry-powa In reply to NydiaZitrone [2014-05-06 16:23:54 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. I'm sorry though, I don't have the time to correct the end at the moment but I'll do it as soon as I can. If you correct the beginning of your story, I'll also re-read it to check if I didn't forget anything.
Your story is good, so I thought it was worse the corrections. I hope I helped.
I really enjoyed reading that fanfiction.
How long have you been learning english ?
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NydiaZitrone In reply to cherry-powa [2014-05-07 13:51:06 +0000 UTC]
There's no need to be hurry.
Should I correct all the mistakes you've told me?
We started learning English at Grade 3.We learn it mostly for exams.
It was my first time to write such a long fanfic in English.
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