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NydiaZitrone — ACASA (Law x OC) 8. DOCTOR?
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A Few weeks later
Acasa finally got things right.
She settled down in a small town on Grand Line.
She had to work for at least half a year to pay for her living.
On one evening as usual, in the alley she was reading newspaper on her way 'home' after work, searching for any reports about the D brothers. She was so concentrated that she bumped into someone.
"I'm so sorry, sir!" She apologized immediately.
"...It's all right ..." Cold yet attractive.
She raised her head to see the person. The flurry white hat with dark spots caught her eyes. The hat was for cute guys not someone looked like a stoic. He was a tall young man who had a goatee. Two golden earrings on both sides. He had a pair of silvery-grey eyes with some unfathomable emotion. Also he had his long katana on his shoulder.
Acasa went back to her rented room and put the newspaper on the desk. She was too tired, so she decided to sleep early.
That raccoon faced guy was always in her mind and she had an instinct that he would be a very important person.
"Help! Help me!"
Upon finishing shower, she heard someone calling for help, and it was the voice of her landlady.
She dressed casually in her sleeping dress and grabbed a coat, running straightly towards the voice, only to find the landlady lying against the wall with painful expression.
"Pills?"
"No...doc..."
"Wait for a moment, Mrs. Maggie. I'll call a doctor!"
She got no time to change clothes. Rushing down the steps, Acasa was unluckily tripped, almost falling down the stairs miserably, but she was luckily caught, actually being saved gracefully.
"What's wrong?" It was that raccoon face. "I heard someone's calling help."
"Doctor, landlady!" She made it urgent.
"Calm down."
He went to check the old lady, after that he carried her to the bed and shut the door, asking Acasa to guard it. Though she was curious but she waited patiently outside.
A quarter later
The door opened again. Acasa could see the old lady sleeping peacefully.
"She needs to rest for few days ..."
"Can’t believe that you are a doctor…" Her unbelievable face gave her out.
"Is there any question?"
"No, thank you very much!"
She thanked him and gave him a sweet smile.
That is the thing important, right?
He stared at her face and sensed that she was thinking about something. But he said nothing, just walking downstairs, leaving a "good night".
"Good night, doctor".
It seemed that he was living in the empty room downstairs.
Next Morning
The wind blew the newspaper down the desk, turning a few pages. It revealed the list of rookies.
She glanced at it and found Luffy and --That guy!
He is a pirate!
The Surgeon of Death --Trafalgar Law!
She rushed down stairs and found the room already empty. ;font-family:"Georgia","serif"'>
Luffy seemed quite clam.
"You said who loves who?" Too shocked to arrange the words.
"You heard me, Ace loves you...Tru--"He was hit in the face, "WTF! You beat me twice without reasons today!"
"It's true." She also felt the pain from her fist. "But how did you know?"
"He told me when I asked why he kissed you secretly while you were sleeping after the farewell party last night." Luffy sat on the floor and explained, "He said it was because he loves you even if he was also not sure about what love is."
"Luffy?"
"What?"
He was hugged to death by the overjoyed girl. "I love you!"
"Huh? Let go of me, I can't breathe!"
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Comments: 2
She was *so* concentrated that she bumped
He *was* tall
two golden *earrings* (two "r")
not someone *who* looked *so* stoic
He *also* had his nodachi on the shoulder
"he does like spots" => if you mean he appreciate spots it should be a past tense : "he did like spots"
she *decided* to sleep early
always in her mind, *as* she had a *premonition*
*ran straight* towards
*found* the landlady
with *a* painful expression
and unluckily tripped (without "was")
"I heard someone *call for help*"
Acasa to guard it (without "for")
She was curious (no "though")
she *waited*
She *needS* to rest
"*Are you* a doctor ?"
*and walked* downstairs
in the empty room downstairs. (no "now")
"turning *a* few pages"
the list of *the* rookies
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I'm wandering whether I can use the present indefinite tense when character is thinking.
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