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Description This is just my second version of my first Ben 10 alien OC sketch, SubMarine, that I made this summer.

NAME: SUBMARINE

SPECIE: CETACEAN BIPEDUS

PLANET: AQUARIUM

POWERS/ABILITIES:
- he can swim very fast;
- he can breath both on dry land and under water(were he is the strongest);
- he has very strong jaws:
- he know when he is being attacked because of his sonar(so he can manage very well in dark places) ;
- he can also spit parts of what he ate as an explosive charge;
- he has a good developed muscular strength;
- he can turn invisible only underwater or when he's wet(edit : I added this power because of the Backstory and because of the movie Predator, enough is enough Hollywood!).

WEAKNESSES:
- he can't resist on dry land without his skin been hydrated so a sunny day on the ground can make him weak;
- his eye sight is weak so he depends a lot on his sonar or sense of smell;
- he doesn't communicate trough words, he communicates trough some groan noise;
- he isn't to agile on dry land or fast like is in the water, and he also looses some of his strength;
- he is vulnerable when comes out of the water to breath;
- the invisibility on land lasts until the water evaporates(edit : I added this power because of the Backstory and because of the movie Predator, enough is enough Hollywood!).

BACK STORY:
The specie of Submarine is a specie of predators that rely on all senses to catch prey and also uses the strength and anger to catch prey even larger than himself, sometimes alone and sometimes hunt in groups, they are hunting and land and water, they are hunting just to satisfy their hunger, when they aren't hungry they are very gentle and docile and this rarely happens because they are almost always hungry, they are living near the water so they can be close to the source that maintain them in life, that being the water.
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Comments: 23

Zigwolf [2019-04-26 17:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Very cool alien. He could do with a cooler name, maybe something like DepthStrike.Β 

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nymzok In reply to Zigwolf [2019-04-27 13:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I know I gave him a name a bit PokΓ©monish, but maybe is time for a change, I like your name DepthStrike, but how about StealthDive or StealthSwim, or StealthDepth, or StealthTide, or StealthBomb, or StealthProwl, or Stealth-Reflux, or DeepTrench, ScavengeDive, or ScavangeBomb, or BelchBomb, or AcidReflux, or ChewReflux, or Starve-Reflux, or TreanchDive, or TreanchBomb, or ReefDive, or ReefProwl, or ReefHunt, or ReefReflux, or ProwlTrap, or RadarBlind, or Blindside, or CrushLand, all sounds good to me too, what do you think? Which name do like?

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Zigwolf In reply to nymzok [2019-04-27 17:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Out of those ones, StealthDive and Deep Trench are the ones that best roll off the tongue.Β 

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nymzok In reply to Zigwolf [2019-04-27 19:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Those are good names. They should be after expressions or something that reminds a kid about an expression he heard. It's been so long since I'm searching for the right name, and after so many tries it looks sometimes like I never scratched the surface with those names.
Something like WickedWave, or SharpTurn, SavageSea.
What do you think?

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Zigwolf In reply to nymzok [2019-05-01 18:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Wicked Wave and Savage Sea sounds more fitting for a water controlling alien than an alien in water. SharpTurn strikes me as speed related.Β 

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nymzok In reply to Zigwolf [2019-05-02 11:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the Feedback!
SharpTurn can be used sure, but also can be used on a speedster that's running on land can, or other like Driftwood, from all these possibilities but it's thought for me to even get to one decision.
I'm thinking of his ability and the practicalities in different situations, and how Ben might use him.
So for that reason I came up with this expressions and names: DarkLurk, Lurktrap, Lurkreef, LurkTide, LurkClaw, Lurkruff, Lurktuff, LurkWave, SilentLurk, LurkSoak, LurkMope, LurkDrift, LurkBait, PrivateLurk, TenseLurk, BlindLurk, SeaLurk, Luretrap, Lurereef, Lureruff, Luretuff, LureTide, LureWave, SilentLure, LureSoak, LureMope, LureDrift, LureBait, PrivateLure, HideLure, TenseLure, or go in another way with: WaveDrift or WaveTrick(because of speed on water), or Blindside, Blindside, BlindDrift, Blinking, Staredown, Blinkback, Blinksoak, BlinkWave, BlinkTide, BlankStare, StareBack(because he's partially blind, and "if you stare at the abyss long enough, the abyss stares back"), or Lookout, Trackdown(because he's good at taking down anything using his active senses), or ForceFed(because of his hunger, and his strength).
What do you think?

P.S.: Sorry for the lengthy messages!

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Zigwolf In reply to nymzok [2019-05-08 04:58:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

Driftwood sounds like a speedster alien who is also a tree.Β 

Out of those, Lurktide and Wavetrick are the best sounding ones.Β 

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nymzok In reply to Zigwolf [2019-05-10 18:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Driftwood, definitely sounds like a speedster who is also part tree/plant like alien.
You can have the name if you want it, for your alien idea.

I like those names but I feel like I need something like WaveRide, TearShroud, WaterRaft, SulkRide, TearSulk, LurkSulk, SulkTide, SoakThirst, VanishThirst, VanishWater, VanishDrip, VanishVapor, CoverVapor, EvaporRize, Evapor8, Condns8(condensate), HauntTail, SweatBullet, OceanFoam, OceanRide, DrySkin, DryEyes, DryHump(intentional dry humor).

Hope I don't annoy you!

I'm sorry if I disturbed you!

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Zigwolf In reply to nymzok [2019-05-13 04:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

WaveRide is good (Wave Rider is better)

Ha, I love DryHump

You don't annoy me, I enjoy these chats.Β 

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nymzok In reply to Zigwolf [2019-05-16 11:47:42 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

I'm glad you enjoy these chats!

I like the name WaveRider too!
I also like the name DryHump , but because of the more comedic reasons, and also with the fact that the first version when I did of this alien the purpose was to make him look like a bipedal Humpback Wail, but with this version I was inspired by the Killer Wails, or the Orca, and the fact that when was younger and stupid, back then I didn't knew the Orcas and the Killer Wail where the same, and thought that the Killer Wails, where actually a separate predator that killed wails, my teacher thought that by taking me in a school trip to the aquarium would solved that nonsense but it sparked another one when I saw the Megalodon, and thought to myself that must be the Killer Wail, soon after I saw the movie "Save Willy" and as I watched, that movie cleared my nonsense, confused, young mind.

I also scrapped at the bottom of the barrel and came out with this name: SteakOut.

What do you think? Too much?

P.S.: I like the name WaveRider so much, but I think it going to better suited for another alien, one that loves surfing maybe.

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omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-10 07:59:16 +0000 UTC]

so cool

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nymzok In reply to omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-10 13:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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omnitrixradiation126 In reply to nymzok [2009-12-10 14:52:18 +0000 UTC]

i mean it all your aliens is so cool!

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nymzok In reply to omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-10 15:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for boosting my self esteem.

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omnitrixradiation126 In reply to nymzok [2009-12-13 00:14:37 +0000 UTC]

-_-

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nymzok In reply to omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-13 21:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Sorry if I offended you in some way with my comment but that day was a bad day for me and your comment made me feel better about my self, so thanks.

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omnitrixradiation126 In reply to nymzok [2009-12-15 06:38:15 +0000 UTC]

i mean it , its cool if they put your alien in bens watch

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nymzok In reply to omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-15 11:59:52 +0000 UTC]

I'll be happy if they put him in the watch.

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omnitrixradiation126 In reply to nymzok [2009-12-16 11:06:34 +0000 UTC]

yeah,your alien are better than ripjaw,cuz they look alike but your aliens better

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nymzok In reply to omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-16 14:23:15 +0000 UTC]

The idea of him came to me on a summer night dream.

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omnitrixradiation126 In reply to nymzok [2009-12-17 08:39:06 +0000 UTC]

hahahahaha

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nymzok In reply to omnitrixradiation126 [2009-12-17 16:40:31 +0000 UTC]

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omnitrixradiation126 In reply to nymzok [2009-12-19 07:11:34 +0000 UTC]

:incongrin--plz:

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