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Published: 2014-07-06 17:10:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2768; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description        Blake opened the door to her dorm and let out a relieved sigh to see that it was largely uninhabited. Only Yang was present, and she was busy staring out of the window. Blake could see her partner’s reflection clearly enough to see the vacant look in Yang’s violet eyes. Blake shook her head and found the resolve to finally broach the issue she had noticed.
       Team RWBY’s dorm room had been thick with tension. However, Blake noticed that Yang had been the main cause of it. The blonde seldom looked anyone in the eyes when she spoke, and her carefree attitude had been replaced by one of deep contemplation with a tinge of nerves. On the other hand, Weiss had become even more haughty than usual. The heiress would often go out of her way to be close to Yang, sardonically brushing against the blonde whenever possible. Blake also couldn’t remember a time in the past week where Weiss didn’t have a predatory smirk. The black-haired girl wanted to ignore the odd signs as just minor eccentricities that her teammates had. However, after a week of ignoring, Blake’s curiosity was at its peak.
       “What is going on?” Blake asked. She winced at her accusatory tone.
       Yang gave a tiny jump and turned around. When she saw who was standing there, her shoulders slumped. The blonde looked at her hands and said, “I don’t know why this is happening. If I was ever going to be in a lesbian relationship, I thought I would’ve wanted it with you! You should’ve been my dream girl, Blake!”
       Blake had no idea where Yang’s admission had come from, but she knew she never wanted to leave a conversation more than at that moment. Her mind ceased to provide coherent thoughts, and in the wasteland that she found herself in, Blake could only stare vacantly at her partner. However, if only to get to the heart of the matter, and to secretly acquire more blackmail material to get out of cleaning the bathroom again, Blake stood in place and forced an understanding smile to get Yang to continue.
       The blonde didn’t need any assistance to proceed. “I mean, just look at you! You’ve got a killer rack, legs that go for miles, and a mysterious and sassy attitude that I thought would make me go crazy. But instead, looking at you arouses me as much as looking at my sister!” Yang ground her teeth together and started pulling at her hair. “But when I look at that short, prissy, flat, and condescending little princess, I just want to tear her clothes off and throw her against a wall! This isn’t how it’s supposed to work!”
       Blake took a step back as flames started to envelope her partner, but she remained silent otherwise. A knot had formed in her throat and she tried to swallow past it. Perhaps the middle of the dorm had not been the best place to ask Yang about her problems. Her books were a little too close to the growing flames.
       “And now that I’m thinking about her, I’m not going to stop thinking about her! She’ll just worm her way into my brain again, and as soon as she’s almost out, that little princess will give me one of those adorable sideways glances or brush up against me. Then I’ll have another sleepless night while she acts like nothing happened! Where’s the justice in that?” Yang had taken to shouting at the ceiling for the rest of her rant, the last words managing to echo throughout the small room. When she was done, the blonde stood panting in the middle of her personal inferno. Blake was busy wondering where the closest fire extinguisher was when the door opened.
       Yang’s gaze immediately snapped downward and a slim smile crossed her lips. “Weiss,” she said in a throaty whisper.  
       Blake didn’t even see the heiress before she was sent flying out of the room. The door slammed violently behind her, and she could hear Yang and Weiss ramming each other against the furniture. Blake picked herself up and dusted herself off. She had gotten what she wanted, but the enlightenment didn’t make her feel any better. Instead, Blake only thought about how she wanted to get away from the dorm before her ears picked up on any sounds that would scar her forever.
       As she descended the stairs, she hoped that the dorm wouldn’t burn down, but she knew that if anyone could calm Yang’s flame, it would be a girl made of ice.
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Comments: 17

knives4cash [2014-07-09 04:40:15 +0000 UTC]

This amuses me greatly. The meta tone behind the fandom, and the sudden turnabout to justify the twist. Brilliant work as always, OC. 

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ObeseCommando In reply to knives4cash [2014-07-09 17:27:43 +0000 UTC]

OC? Oh no, I have become the most original of characters! I must become super powerful and shipped with everyone, as no one can resist my mysterious charm and entirely black wardrobe! What a terrible fate!


Joking not joking aside, thank you for reading.

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knives4cash In reply to ObeseCommando [2014-07-09 21:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Ack! I must... resist! Shipping you! WITH CANON CHARACTERS! AAAAGH! You're so over powered, and so based on the author writing you! It's like... like I'm... falling... for YOU! 

You really couldn't have gone with "HeavyCommando" or "ObeseSoldier" or something else? It just HAD to be OC? 

Such a terrible fate.

And no problem. You're one of the few writers whom I enjoy. You never disappoint! So don't start now...

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ObeseCommando In reply to knives4cash [2014-07-10 03:35:17 +0000 UTC]

All according to plan. Soon I will ask legions of artists taking requests to draw me while I write stories about myself, which will be uploaded on various websites.

In my defense, I chose the name years ago, back when fandoms were nothing more than a myth to an impressionable young man who wanted nothing more than to write stories. Then I learned about them and was too attached to the name to change. Plus it cost money to change names on Xbox Live and I don't play that game.

And don't worry, I don't plan to write any stories that aim to disappoint! Excuse me while I close all these Word docs.

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Cipher111996 [2014-07-07 13:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Freezerburn???????????

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ObeseCommando In reply to Cipher111996 [2014-07-08 06:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah.

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Cipher111996 In reply to ObeseCommando [2014-07-08 14:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmmmm................

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SkireTehFox [2014-07-07 13:09:21 +0000 UTC]

hell yeah

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ObeseCommando In reply to SkireTehFox [2014-07-08 06:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it!

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Naryt-R-Neath [2014-07-07 03:34:42 +0000 UTC]

This was different from what I am accustomed to in RWBY works. Yet, that difference makes this a most entertaining piece. Yang's outburst was certainly a stroke of genius. I do look forward to more.

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ObeseCommando In reply to Naryt-R-Neath [2014-07-07 15:52:03 +0000 UTC]

You shall receive more.

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FH47 [2014-07-07 01:38:43 +0000 UTC]

That was...odd O.o

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ObeseCommando In reply to FH47 [2014-07-07 01:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Good odd or bad odd?

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FH47 In reply to ObeseCommando [2014-07-07 02:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Unsure lol. But hey, if Ladybug is next, thats great
Love Blake & Ruby :3

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chaosarmageddon [2014-07-06 19:18:04 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Like, At first Yang was getting into Blake, then she found Weiss and her shared a common interest in Achieve Men, things escalated, and at that point, you have a lot of alternative paths you can write about how things evolved. Though I wonder in these scenarios "what does Blake want instead of Yang?" Does she want Ruby? Maybe Velvet? ... Sun?

...I wouldn't mind some maroon Blake Ruby action >.>

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ObeseCommando In reply to chaosarmageddon [2014-07-07 00:14:29 +0000 UTC]

I already have a short Ladybug piece set up. Expect it in the future!

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chaosarmageddon In reply to ObeseCommando [2014-07-07 01:39:27 +0000 UTC]

The hype train has no brakes!

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