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Obsequity — Discontent
Published: 2012-09-27 14:34:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description A vague wave of nauseous nostalgia
ebbs and flows - comes and goes..
The distant sound of a busy highway
Bleeds out into the horizon.
An empty cloudless sky
reflects the hunger in my soul-
The burning desire to be
Something more than what I am now.
My hopefull heart sinks
into the inky waters of dissapointment-
To the depths of lonliness,
A primal cage that shrinks with age
Icy bars to grasp for eternity
With dead black fingers,
Forever wailing my unheard song of sorrow,
Bellowing pain from the core of my being.
I fear I'll always be as meaningless
as a grain of sand in an endless sea of despair.
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Comments: 4

Lone-Gull [2012-12-12 19:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, forgot to add, very powerful imagery by the way!!

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Obsequity In reply to Lone-Gull [2012-12-17 17:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you..! I try to appeal to the senses to make it seem more relate-able. And, honestly I didn't think anybody ever reads my poetry! Thank you so much for commenting, it means so much to me! I feel I should write another right now!

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Lone-Gull In reply to Obsequity [2012-12-19 21:07:25 +0000 UTC]

awesome! Glad it had a good impact *hug*

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Lone-Gull [2012-12-12 19:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Keep saying what's inside, you're good at it I love the flow all your poems seem to have

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