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Published: 2016-01-29 23:49:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1008; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 13
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This week I've done some poster with scene building. I was a little surpised at the fact that it doesn't need so many light effects as I expected.Huge Thanks toΒ because of posteditig the mane. I realy like this style. Orginal SFM Poster in 4K available: Here. Β
Used Software: Source Filmmaker
MLP belongs to Hasbro
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Das freut mich sehr.
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Oh man, I've been looking to make hair in posters lately and this is just the look I've wanted them to have!
How did you learn this technique? It looks awesome!
EDIT: Oh.. oops, didn't check the description 
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So, every is fine, isn't it?
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Oh?
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I always like to hear opinions and critiques. Please go on.
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Weeell... let's give this thingy a look.
The hair looks amazing, I'll give you that, the scenery however needs some real work.Β
I've seen the trees in the background before, they are cardboard ones which fit nicely if the scene is dark, but in this case, this is very visible, it would be better if you used more detailed models, also a forest doesn't usually have pines all perfectly lined up, they are randomly planted as, well, it's nature.Β
Grass is okay, but the plants in the back are also weirdly posed, once again, I suggest to randomize their position more as nature doesn't work in an organized way, something I also noticed is that asides the character, everything looks really empty, try experimenting with more props to fill your scenarios, and check the rule of thirds if that's what you are aiming for.Β
Try also having your character to do something, if it's standing there, try to make it stand there for a reason, photography is great when you try to add motion into your pictures, when they try to make the viewer feel something, be that happiness, sadness, grief, etc.Β
Hope this helps!
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Thanks. Next time I try to improve these things.
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