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Corrvo's lovely bird signer Jen getting help to get out of the containment unit www.deviantart.com/art/Sing-Soβ¦After Jen's shuttle had been caught up in the Neutron star blast Jen found herself growing and growing. When Jen out grew her loft in one day at 40 claws tall. Jen's signing career took a interesting turn in that her fame grew along with her. But when Jen grew past a 120 claws tall her signing career took a turn for the worst. In that it started to fall apart when she was inside of a music hall and had a massive growth spurt when she grew from 70 claws tall to 140 claws tall smashing apart the music hall she was in. Luckily no one got hurt. But after that happened the military captured her and put her into a underground containment unit to keep her under control regardless as a once famous signer. In that as far as they cared Jen had died when her shuttle got hit by the neutron star and that this creature that looked like her was a mutant.
So what the military had planned for her was they were going to leave in the containment unit. The plan was not feed her to cause the freakishly growing monster to stop growing and starve to death. Of course for some freakish reason Jen while in the containment unit kept on growing past 200 claws tall and she was now outgrowing the containment unit. Jen's growing was making her so big that her claws and hips along with her stomach were smashing apart the walls of the containment unit. Meanwhile Jen's hunger had grown along with the lack of food had made Jen painfully hungry to the point she was crying. Jen was also heart broken at this point in that her great singing career along with her wealth had been destroyed by the Neutron star blowing up. She also didn't understand at how her fans who once called her the cutest signer in the Galaxy would throw her into a shrinking containment unit to starve.
Jen stopped crying when she heard a voice say, "Jen I brought you tons of food." She looked next to her and saw a dumb truck load of fish and the same green bird she had seen before. She said, "It's you again and you brought me a little snack!"
She said, "Why did you do all this for me this is so very nice of you to sneak into a military base to bring me food?"
The Green bird said, "Ah you know I mean your growing in my opinion has made you even cutter in that I love really tall chicks."
Jen said,"Hum I think this stems from you saying that I was the first friendly cute bird that you came across."
The Green bird said, "Jen that could have a lot to do with it. Up till then I had no idea that you guys could talk and understand why I was saying."
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WorldBuildersInc [2015-01-18 19:29:06 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate your interest in World-Builders-Inc , but the rules are we accept ORIGINAL worlds/universes only. No fanfics.
Sorry dude.
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phoenix899 [2014-07-29 03:46:25 +0000 UTC]
woah..... look on the bright side ^v^ die in the right spot you die happy XD
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 03:51:56 +0000 UTC]
Luckly for Jen she is going to get to double in size again and there won't be any more containment units in the world big enough to hold her.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:01:47 +0000 UTC]
well its not the first time a giant lady consumed us all
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:05:37 +0000 UTC]
Luckily Jen won't eat anyone but they are going to have to work day and night to find her the tons of food that she needs to be happily keep her stomach from wanting her to tear up the city to look for food.
In my giant artworks I always try to show the characeter how they would react if they became giant sized. Not where a once cute and nice character grows giant sized and starts eating everyone and knocking things over out of aggression.
This was part of a personal fan fic I made where Jen, Mati and Priestess Eyrin are on a star transport that gets cough up in a Neturon Star blowing up and it starts making them grow giant sized when they return home www.deviantart.com/art/Jen-in-β¦
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:08:32 +0000 UTC]
that has to be the greatest Attack on Titian Fan Fic ever
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:15:08 +0000 UTC]
It's sort of like Gullver's Travels where the three birds think they are in the miniature land of Lilliput Here is Mati dealing with it www.deviantart.com/art/Mati-inβ¦ and www.deviantart.com/art/Mati-thβ¦
I have another fan fic which is based exactly off of the Southwinds about a guy who takes up in Marelo's vineyard and is trying to get out of Kalaishi City. On top of that he has no real idea how he got there and how to get out.
I have to ask Corvvo first about posting these two ideas. In that that the giant bird one is not really related to the southwinds. But the other one takes place along side the southwinds.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:17:45 +0000 UTC]
I kinda thought of making a fan fiction about the south winds... though I couldn't really describe a human landing on the planet
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:26:55 +0000 UTC]
It's not written in a traditional sense like that that the guy teleported in with help from type of machine after escaping from something really horrible that he doesn't remember. He also has suit that makes him look like a bird www.deviantart.com/art/Chillin⦠and here he is in of all places meeting with kalen www.deviantart.com/art/Kalahas⦠.
The biggest thing he has is he has to travel across the city to put his machine together after it breaks. Another thing that starts happening is he starts having feelings for the birds and he starts thinking he is one even though he can't fly and is quite comical with how he tries to act like one. He also ends up having friends and even fails in love for some of the birds. Such as he feels said when Marelo's son dies in the starship attack. While at the same time he knows the birds could do a lot of damage to him inducing eating him.
It's notΒ based off of something like Planet of the apes where they going after him. In that it's ether one of two things going on. The first one is they never find out who he is or what he is. And the second is that he is so clumsy and oath like that they quickly figure out what he is and don't care in that they don't view him as a danger.
One of the spoofs though the storyline is he is childishly worried that the birds are going to eat him.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:30:31 +0000 UTC]
I love that movie
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:33:30 +0000 UTC]
It's not based off of planet of the apes. That is the most common formats people would think something like this would be based off of. In that if this was a planet of the apes movie and the birds where horrible he would try to kill as many of them as possible.
But in this idea the birds in some cases turn out to be nicer to him then a lot of the others he knows in his life. Such as he has a interesting thing where he gets nearly crushed to death by something that gravely wounds him when he tries to save one of the bird's lives from being buried alive.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:40:45 +0000 UTC]
that sound more better then the planet of the apps. I want to read some of that.
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:43:55 +0000 UTC]
What competes things for him is that when he shows up he is badly wounded and spends a lot of time trying to hide his injuries from the birds even the ones who he knows are his friends in till he gets over whelmed from it.
It would also be different from Avater where the blue guy gets to have a blast the whole time. In that he knows every extra day and hour that he spends in the bird world is pushing his luck. Also he has to figure out how everything works on his own vs something telling him how it works. For one thing he can't read what all of their signs are written in.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:45:30 +0000 UTC]
best way to make bad movies better, still sounds like a blast
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:49:33 +0000 UTC]
As for the giant bird idea Jen and Mati along Priestess Eyrin he shows up in that has a monster movie directer trying to film a monster movie about bird girls growing really big. When the three bird girls start growing they think it's his special effects and don't panic thinking it's apart of the movie. Meanwhile he doesn't tell them that they are really growing to avoid them panicking.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 04:51:23 +0000 UTC]
thats kinda comman in movies or books
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 04:54:00 +0000 UTC]
What also happens is that they are never able to get the bird girls to shrink back to normal size they only keep getting bigger in till they stop growing.
After the three of them grow over 500 feet tall the three of them take Lilliput over to make sure they get the tons of food that need to keep them fed. Also what also makes them take over is they are tried of being threatened by the birds and their tiny weapons.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 05:00:27 +0000 UTC]
then wouldn't the world run out of food like that?
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 05:05:40 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't in the idea due to the three being birds they can eat a lot more things then people can. Such as I have scene where Jen eats a dead whale on a beach and Priestess Eyrin tries to go fishing for a giant squid. Also the Lilliputian birds raise food production to make there new rulers happily. Also Priestess Eyrin and her friends fly around to different parts of the planet to look for foodoceanrailroader.deviantart.comβ¦ and thisΒ oceanrailroader.deviantart.comβ¦
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 05:16:46 +0000 UTC]
ok about that dead whale part, I dont think that might be good for her or the story.
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 05:45:07 +0000 UTC]
When she eats the whale shes so huge at that point that it's only a beak full to her. She also after that deices to go into the HO scale scale Lilliputian fishing village to have the Lilliputian birds bring her real food that tastes good. In that up to this point she has been really been nice towards the small HO scale birds by not knocking down their cities and resting the urge to eat them.
I have another scene where Priestess Eyrin eats 60 cows whole in one sitting. In that it takes five or six of them to make a beak full. In that scene Priestess Eyrin comes a small Lilliputian bird town hundreds of birds and the cows. She knows they are little birds like her but she has no idea it's her home land and she has grown to colossal prepositions. At the same time she had not eaten anything filling for herself in days leaving her famished and weak.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 05:59:24 +0000 UTC]
sounds simular to Attack on titian
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 06:02:19 +0000 UTC]
I did do a artwork with Zenma www.deviantart.com/art/Zenma-l⦠growing giant sized. I think Zenma from her looks she would most likely do the most damaged giant sized with her playful and crazy nature.
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phoenix899 In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-29 06:03:57 +0000 UTC]
great landscape by the way
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OceanRailroader In reply to phoenix899 [2014-07-29 06:06:37 +0000 UTC]
It was made before I discovered Inkscape this is what Zenma looks like in Inksape. www.deviantart.com/art/Zenma-tβ¦
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SammfeatBlueheart [2014-07-15 10:57:03 +0000 UTC]
Poor Jen, she was lonely in the containment unit. So good that the green bird has a good birdy heart that he gave Jeny tons of food for her. I hope that they discover and learn that how important life is no matter how big it is.
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OceanRailroader In reply to SammfeatBlueheart [2014-07-15 16:01:12 +0000 UTC]
They haven't really shown this type of ideas in giant movies were the girl starts off as a successful and popular signer and then when she becomes giant sized everyone avoids her and she finds herself alone.
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SammfeatBlueheart In reply to OceanRailroader [2014-07-17 22:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Poor Jen.
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