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ochaocha — A JAR OF HEART
Published: 2012-06-30 09:05:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 440; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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i'm trying to draw 3D thingee, but i failed : Phaha.
i did this last last week.
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Lets start with the most important attribute of a sketch; proportions.
While the jar is well made, the mouth is too circular. The sketch is one from the side pose (at least according to me) from where the mouth should appear to be rather oval. This gives the sketch an over all ambiguous look.
Then the concept. While the title matches with the sketch, the heart itself should have been more prominent or standing out. It is there, but it does not stand out so that someone else might also call it "a jar of heart".
Lastly, the shading is beautiful. There is consistency and the grainy texture works very well. Especially around the mouth the shading is very impressive.
So overall I would say it was a great sketch with these few problems. I hope my critique helped you for I'd say you have a lot of talent.
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Reminds me of the song Jar of Hearts by Christina Perri
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awwww ;w; thank youu thank youu
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Yeah I have to agree with Karina.
The perspective looks a little off, but I like the highlights and shading. Great job for just starting out in that direction. I have a feeling you will just get better with practice.
Anxious to see your next attempt.
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Wah~~so pretty! The perspective looks a little off, but I like the highlights and shading!
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thank youu thank youu ;v;
yeahh 
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