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WhEEZE first of all I'd like to say I owe my life to the extension because without it art block would have prevented me from finishing in time when I started this in later October AKLSDAL. But I worked really really hard on this and I'm proud of the result!!! Not to mention I now have a sWEET poster because I did this piece traditionally!!! Its done in mostly colored pencil but I did take some watercolor to the background to help speed things along and get the better texture/effect on the wall. But it had to be put on one of my much larger sketchbooks to fit haha. This was also my first time doing such a detailed scene traditionally so I'm extra happy. But anyways enough of my rambling and lets add on the story.
I'm,,,, so sorry its so long I tried to keep it as short as I could AKSLDKA. Its fairly simple to read though with a lot of dialogue so it should go fast!!! I still,,, apologize though lMAO.
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The light of a single candle flickered around the back corner of the old private school lounge. There, three dainties and a rather colorful demon could be found making themselves as comfortable as they could for the night. The building they were currently residing in was actually what used to be the student housing just a little ways off from the main school building itself, but the group figured it would be a bit cozier to set up in a place that was originally meant for sleeping than to camp out in a classroom or something inside the school. Outside you could hear the rain from a storm hitting up against the window panes and the occasional accompanying roll of thunder. It was storming just enough to set the mood right for another Halloween evening but not enough to make sitting in the unfamiliar building any spookier than it already was.
As a flash of lightning temporarily lit up the whole room, Yoana held out one of her strawberry printed blankets to Laurel who was setting up his area at the end of the row after Sophie and Cas. “I hope this one will be enough!!! I really wish I would have brought more blankets with me, I have tons of them. But this is one of the thicker ones at least so it should keep you warm still!” the orange haired Dainty chimed. The other carefully took the blanket from her and did a brief assessment before flashing her a soft grin in reply, “I think it should be fine! Thank you so much for letting me borrow one of yours for the night.” As he started to lay it out with his sleeping bag Yoana took a few hops back to her sleeping setup to continue working on her own as well, “No problem!!! I know this was a little last minute for you, and if you do get cold in the middle of the night don’t be afraid to come over wake me!! I won’t mind I promise. I think there was still some bedding in some of the dorm rooms we peeked at earlier so I can always give you my other one and I’ll use some of that!”
Before Laurel could politely object or either of the two could add anything else at all for that matter, they were interrupted by a rather unattractive mock gag as a shorter blonde dainty walked between the two and over towards where the rest of their belongings were set. “Yoana that’s disgusting!! With how long this place has been sitting around any of the extra bedding here is probably like, covered in mold.. and dust... and bugs... and have holes from things eating through them… and smell really bad… and have weird stains.” Cas shuddered before gently cradling a sprinkle patterned Hello Kitty plush and pink blanket in one arm and dragging a faded rainbow blanket across the floor for Sophie with the other. “I can hardly believe you dragged me here to begin with, this place is foul! Can you remind me again why you thought this would even be a fun idea in the first place? Why couldn’t we just trick-or-treat like last year or even just have a costume party! That stuff is actually fun and much less gross and doesn’t make my skin crawl- Soph could you be a dear and lay this out for me,” they dropped the rainbow blanket to the side closer to where their boyfriend was going to be sleeping and held out their own blanket to him. He accepted it with an unbothered ‘yes babe’ and proceeded to do as he was told.
“Becaaaauuse!! I was at the library with Cyril a few weeks ago and found a really interesting story about this place. So I thought how exciting would it be to have a SLEEPOVER at an old abandoned rich kid school!!”
“Sounds more like trespassing and breaking and entering to me but go off I guess,” Sophie added as he finished smoothing Cas’s blanket and gestured for them to sit.
Seeing the gesture Cas plopped down in frustration, still holding the plush tightly “See Sophie agrees this is a bad idea too!”
Yoana just giggled, “It’ll be fiiiiine! No one comes over here. Everything will be okay!”
Cas let out and irritated whine before leaning over to their friend who in all the banter had finally comfortably seated himself and was simply observing the others, “Laurel hun, if we all die or get caught I am so sorry for dragging the two of you here with me. I am THE WORST friend in the world.” Laurel chuckled a little before replying, “Cas I get dragged into these kinds of things all the time, it’s fine. I do agree this still is not… the best idea… but it’s a bit more exciting than what I’m usually pulled into! Plus you’re here and if this goes anything like the time we met maybe we will be fine.” He was trying to be comforting and optimistic but there was a hint of uncertainty to his tone to give away that Laurel was still as uneasy as the other two were.
Yoana carefully moved the candle from the mantle of the nearby fireplace and set in on the floor between Sophie, Cas, and Laurel’s row and her own set up a little ways across. “Okay but listen!! Do you guys wanna hear the story that I read that made me want to check this place out?”
At the mention of story time Laurel’s ears perked up a bit and Sophie was interested enough to lean in some more curiously as well. Noticing the other two’s interest Cas groaned and scooted in closer with them reluctantly.
Giddy, Yoana bounced a bit in her spot and clapped her hands in excitement, “Eeee!! Great okay so, it’s not a scary story but it is a rather bittersweet one so still be prepared.” She leaned in a little closer herself so that everyone could see each other’s faces more clearly in the candlelight before beginning.
“Many many years ago when this school was up and running there was a girl by the name Nora that attended here. Misfortune after misfortune came into her life and eventually the poor girl went into the woods surrounding the school and took her own life to stop the emotional pain and the heartache. However while she was in school she met another girl named Gertrude that she developed a crush on. Gertrude had moved away to study abroad which was another event that brought Nora closer to the edge but before she died she wanted to at least confess to her so that even if those feelings would have never been returned if she stayed, they weren’t a secret anymore. But she forgot to include it in her last letter saying goodbye. When Gertrude received the goodbye letter and came rushing back to the school to confirm what had happened she was struck with grief for coincidentally she had loved Nora too and was hoping to confess to her as well, either in their letters or when they met again after their studies. Shaken, she made her way back to where she was staying, but disoriented from what had happened to Nora she hadn’t been paying as much attention as she should and had stepped to cross a street right as a car was on its way down. Not having confessed their feelings to one another the two girls’ ghosts now wander the halls and the yards of this school in a hopeless game of hide-and-seek, a game they’d play together all the time back in their school days, praying that one day they might find the other hiding. But since they are both the seekers, neither ever stays still long enough to be found. And so on and on the game continues as they both hope to one day find their missing half.”
Yoana sat back again once she finished the story and looked to take in the others’ reactions. Sophie still just had the same curiosity in his face with the remaining traces of attentiveness he had while listening to Yoana speak, Laurel had been intently listening as well and seemed touched by their story, and Cas… wait were they crying?
“Babe are you alright?” Sophie questioned after hearing a sniff from his significant other and leaned around to look at Cas’s face.
“Fine!! Fine, fine I’m just fine. I am absolutely not crying. I don’t believe that story for a second, Yoana you’re still absolutely crazy for thinking this was a fun idea!” they exclaimed while furiously wiping away any tears in their eyes in denial.
The others started to laugh at the smaller Daint until they all slowly quieted down and turned to face the entrance from the hallway. Approaching the room were footsteps and the sound of a girl humming to herself. Scared of who might be approaching in the abandoned building Laurel pressed closer to Cas, who clutched even tighter to their Hello Kitty and reached to tightly grab their boyfriend’s arm with the other. Sophie stiffened protectively and Yoana… unlike the others watched the door with less fear and more curiosity, leaning forward onto her knees as if she was going to even get up to investigate herself if needed. She didn’t though, for the figure had turned into the room once it had approached the doorway.
Everyone was now frozen, including the figure that was now revealed to be a pale and semi transparent apparition of what seemed to be a girl around their age. She tilted her head in brief confusion before chuckling awkwardly and approaching, “O-oh hi guys sorry you startled me a bit! There… hasn’t been anyone here for a while so I was just surprised is all! I was starting to wonder where everyone one went…”
The three huddled together remained frozen exactly as they had been, only shifting their gaze when they noticed Yoana slowly stand up in awe, “Nora?”
The spirit looked as shocked as everyone else was by Yoana’s comment but when she turned to look at Yoa her face seemed puzzled as if she was trying to figure something out. She began to move closer just as Yoana took a few steps herself and when she got close enough, reached out with both hands to cup Yoana’s face for closer inspection. Yoana didn’t seem phased at all by this, she was still in the same awestruck state as when the spirit first entered the room.
“Do I… know you by chance? You look really familiar to me but I just can’t put my finger on it-” before she could say any more she was cut off by an ear piercing shriek as Cas released their plush and clung desperately to Sophie’s arm while a cold, pale hand rested on their own.
“Nora?! Oh my god Nora is that really you!!!!”
The spirit turned toward the direction of the voice which belonged to another transparent figure of another girl. It took Nora a few moments to process what she was seeing but once it clicked the two ghosts ran towards each other.
“Gertrude!!!!!!”
“Oh my heavens Nora, it is you!”
The two met up and clung to one another immediately, both now sobbing if that was something they could actually do.
The one now identified as Gertrude placed a hand on either side of Nora’s face and planted a kiss on her forehead, “Oh my god, oh my god oh my god I can’t believe it's you! I actually found you!”
“Found me?! I found you!! Oh wait you’re here, right now. I have something I wanted to tell you once I found you that I forgot to say before I left...”
“I have something I wanted to say too!!! Wait wait, I think I know what it is you wanted to say though. Okay on the count of the three lets both say it. Ready? One, two, three-”
The two locked both hands to each other’s and called out “I love you” in perfect unison. They smiled at each other then broke broke into laughter as more tears formed in their eyes, these ones full of pure delight. They held onto each other and continued to sob and laugh until their voices were only an echo that carried off into the night and the girls themselves had faded away as a sparkling dust that was still just a bit too bittersweet to be compared to glitter.
The room now still and silent as the remaining four stared dumbfounded at where the girls had just stood, it was again Yoana that had broken the silence.
“OH MY GOD GUYS DID YOU SEE THAT!!! We just stalled Nora in one place long enough for her and Gertrude to end up in the same place and helped them pass on!! We just completeled a love story!!! THAT WAS WILD!!!!!!!!! See I told you this would be fun and that everything would be okay!”
The other three just stared at the excited dainty with the same shocked senseless expression on their face. Right then and now they couldn’t process what had just happened but one thing for sure was that this supernatural encounter of well, another supernatural encounter, was something none of them would ever forget.
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Dainties are a closed species created and owned by pajuxi/pajuxi-adopts
The only character here that does not belong to me is Laurel, my fave pink haired boy up in the front there.
He belongs to xCastra <33 (ty again for letting me include him this year as well and I hope I did at least okay with writing him!)
Yoana (main bean who touches the ghost)
Sophie (the actual box of crayons in demon form
and Cas (I think,,, if u know me you know Cas by now AKLSD)
Oh and the two ghosts Nora and Gertrude lmao
those all are my kids <3
And then here are some close ups for you to see some of the details better since its unfortunately a little hard to get a perfect picture where I'm at:
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Comments: 18
cvrryspice [2018-11-11 04:42:31 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS SO COOOOOL........................... i love the spirits' transparency and all the detail!!! *v* yoana's dress is drawn so prettily....... ruffles and folds on pOINT HOLLERS!!!! GOOD PIECE AND BIG BIG PROPS FOR DOING IT ALL TRADITIONALLY KJFSHDKJFHZSKJKLMF
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octisqueesh In reply to cvrryspice [2018-11-12 05:07:39 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I was worried I wouldn't be able to properly convey the transparency traditionally but I've gotten nothing but positive feedback on that so far so I'm extremely relieved and thankful for that!
BIG BIG THANKS FOR THINKING I DID WELL WIT IT!!!! I wanted to use this contest as an excuse to actually push myself to do more traditionally for once since its what I started out with and honestly my fave to use but since my digital is more popular I neglect testing out new skills with my roots haha. So it was fun getting to do that for this piece!
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komugitsune [2018-11-11 01:56:05 +0000 UTC]
i absolutely love all the details in this piece!! like omg you went so hard on this!!
prayer emoji THAT ENDING THO IM EMO
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octisqueesh In reply to komugitsune [2018-11-12 05:04:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!!! I really wanted to try pushing myself on a traditional piece for this since I thought a contest was the perfect opportunity to do that so I'm happy you like it!! ;;V;;/ <33
WEEP AND THANK YOU AS WELL FOR THE COMPLIMENT ON THE END TO WRITING AS WELL. One of these days those two are going to have their own comic so I'm happy to hear people like the little taste of their story that I slipped in here
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Mollygoma [2018-11-11 00:26:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Mygod I GOTTA second everyone on how STUNNING and detailed this whole piece is cuz just--
WOW!?
The watercolors look stunning, and I LOVE the faded effect around the spirits! <3
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octisqueesh In reply to Mollygoma [2018-11-11 18:02:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!!!!! I'm really touched that you all like it so much since this is the biggest piece I've done so far in my two most comfortable media so I'm happy that its being received well ;;v;;/ <33
Especially thank you for the compliment on the fade of the ghosts!! That was something I was worried about mimicking traditionally honestly so I'm very happy to hear I seemed to have done a good job with it in the end!!
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mysthetic [2018-11-10 18:38:56 +0000 UTC]
I CAN'T BELIEVE LIKE... HOW STUNNING THIS IS
like
this is traditional art????????????????????? holy shit?????
how do you have the patience omg...
but seriously this is absolutely amazing, the amount of detail in this blows my mind
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octisqueesh In reply to mysthetic [2018-11-10 18:57:22 +0000 UTC]
YELLS THANK YOU SO MUCH AAAH!!;;<;;/// <333333
Omg honestly though I have far more patience with traditional art anyhow than I do digital. I may mostly draw digitally but I first started out seriously drawing traditionally and using colored pencil so trad is still my fave and the most comfortable and easy for me to use honestly.
But thank you so much though ;;<;;/ <333 The possitive feedback on this piece makes me so heckin happy since I chose to go back to my roots for once haha
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star-stickers [2018-11-10 04:05:31 +0000 UTC]
HEY??? THIS IS BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOD??? all the diff textures in this are wonderful, they really add to the feel imo!!! AND I CANT GET OVER HOW YOU DID THE WINDOWS they're just gorgeous T T9
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octisqueesh In reply to star-stickers [2018-11-10 16:32:45 +0000 UTC]
AAAAH THANK YOU SO MUCH!! it was fun experimenting and trying out all those textures traditionally for once so I'm really happy to hear that you like how that all turned out!
AND I THINK THE WINDOWS ARE MY FAVORITE BACKGROUND DETAIL TOO TBH so thank you so much for that as well I really appreciate it ;;;<;;;/ <3333
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bkomei [2018-11-10 02:08:42 +0000 UTC]
I love how detailed this is!!
the background has a really great texture and the dark colours really makes all the daints stand out! did you use all watercolours?? :0 very well done!
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octisqueesh In reply to bkomei [2018-11-10 02:49:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!!
I mostly used colored pencil but for the walls, fireplace, windows, and a few other smaller details in the background I did the base color and most of the shading with watercolor then went over some bits again with colored pencil to add just a little more texture or darken some areas that my cheap watercolors couldn't make dark enough!
I put a lot of work into it so thank you again I really appreciate it. ;;v;;// <333
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bkomei In reply to octisqueesh [2018-11-10 02:53:26 +0000 UTC]
OHH I see I see!
there's so much going on it's impressive that you did all this work with those tools!! your dedication paid off <33
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octisqueesh In reply to bkomei [2018-11-10 16:48:19 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so so much aaaaah!!!! ;;<;;/ <3333
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xCastra [2018-11-09 17:09:46 +0000 UTC]
IM SO EMO OVER THIS AAAAAAAAAAAA I'm so glad the girls got to reunite in afterlife I'm ;____;
Also absolutely LOVED everyone's interactions like Laurel was so IC and I absolutely loved Cas' antics because Big Mood omg and Yoana darling I'd die to get to visit that kind of place with you take me explore with you next time....
Also I ADORE this drawing like your traditional art is literally #goals and I especially love the way Yoana is drawn like something about her face and her position and everything is so nice and pleasant to look at, and the way you drew the transparency of the ghosts is honestly incredible omg!!! And I love LOVE how Laurel's night gown really looks like the one I use for my Sinfonia boys it makes me so happy???? < 333 ; o ; Thank you SO MUCH for letting Laurel join your gang this year again I'm so so touched by this ;;;
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octisqueesh In reply to xCastra [2018-11-09 17:44:42 +0000 UTC]
AAAAH THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! I'm really happy to hear that you like it!! I'm like terrified rn because I haven't shared writing like this in,,, years so the nice feedback has soothed that fear just a little bit.
I'm happy that I wrote Laurel well too!!! Writing Cas was probably my favorite part other than creating the story as a whole, they just want to go home.
YOANA WOULD BE MORE THAN HAPPY TO BRING YOU ALONG THOUGH NEXT TIME. What few friends she does have aren't even friends they're just her other moms LASKLDKAASKLD. They'd never let her go do things like this hence why she just dragged Cas because they might whine and complain but he's sure not gonna stop her at least. So she'd be thrilled to have someone actually interested go along.
WEEPS Thank you again. I'm glad I chose to do traditional too because I enjoyed working on it a lot more than I did last year's. I still had fun with the other one too! But this felt like less suffering at least other then the background AKLSDJLA. I'm extremely happy with how Yoana came out too so it makes me really happy that you pointed her out specifically!!! Ngl I spent a lot of time just,,, staring at her while working on this alksdalk.
with the pajamas I wanted to put them all in things they probs would actually wear of course and so I thought an older nightgown would suit Laurel well. Plus I did think to how you draw your Singonia boys in them sometimes so I'm like "yes this seems appropriate for Cai's characters" aksldaj
But anyways I'm getting a bit scattered but you have all my thanks <3333333
The gang is always happy to have Laurel around! And I,,, always love getting the chance to draw him lmAO. So thank YOU for the like third time now for letting me. <333
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xCastra In reply to octisqueesh [2018-11-10 08:31:37 +0000 UTC]
ALL YOUR KIDS ARE SO GOOD!!!
And yeah I can understand, I feel like certain things at least for me are harder in traditional vs digital but it's really nice to know you got to work with the medium you feel more confident in! And I think it also shows too, although I think your last year's contribution was super amazing and ambitious too ; o ; < 33
IM SO HAPPY Laurel looks so so pretty in an old nightgown I'm so Blessed aaaa
AND YOU'RE SUPER WELCOME I should be the on thanking YOU for always spoiling my pink boy with amazing art haha (also as a sidenote, I wanted to say the etien pic arrived an GOSH IT'S SO GORGEOUS IRL AND SO LARGE TOO THANK YOU < 33)
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octisqueesh In reply to xCastra [2018-11-10 16:47:57 +0000 UTC]
YELLS THANK YOU They are good beans and I love them dearly.
Ambitious was,,,, certainly the right word to use for last year's piece lmAO. I've still been trYING to make the speedpaint for it actually but my computer doesn't like to work on it for long lmao.
But yeah it was really nice to try it out traditionally this time and I'm def gonna have to do that for another prompt or contest again.
BUT OMG YAY IM SO HAPPY IT FINALLY ARRIVED!!!!!! I was starting to get slightly worried about it showing up even though its,, still withing valid range of arriving lmao. BUT IM SO HAPPY TO HEAR AAAAAH!!!! You're extremely welcome, and I was,,, determined to fit all of his horns in because I personally would have hate to crop them and could not draw it any smaller to achieve that so I'm glad that the slightly larger size does not bother you haha. But again oof I'm so happy it got to you safely!! <333
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